Internet— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more concise. Avoid redundancy like 'really young' and 'a school work'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I started using the Internet at a young age because my parents introduced me to educational games, and I also needed it for school assignments.

Suggestion: Try to avoid grammatical errors such as 'like a multiple times' and 'hand' instead of 'handy'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and make your answer more natural and effective.

Example: I go online several times every day because I use it for work, and also to relax by chatting with friends. Moreover, it's very handy for shopping and watching movies.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant. To improve, add linking words and slightly more detail to make it more coherent and natural.

Example: No, I can't remember a time when I wasn't allowed to use the Internet because even during power outages, I could use my mobile data to stay connected.

Suggestion: Your answer has repetition and grammatical errors. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct mistakes like 'on lines' and 'I always checking'. Use linking words and be more specific about what you do online.

Example: Yes, I think I spend too much time online because I often check my social media accounts like Facebook and my emails throughout the day.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and linking words to make your answer clearer and more natural.

Example: If there were no Internet, I would spend more time outside. I think it would be good to do more physical activities like cycling or playing sports.

× I go on line like a multiple times every day.

✓ I go online multiple times every day.

The phrase 'a multiple times' is incorrect. 'Multiple times' is a quantifier that does not require the article 'a'. Also, 'on line' should be one word 'online'. So, the correct sentence is 'I go online multiple times every day.'

× It's really hand for shopping and watching movies too.

✓ It's really handy for shopping and watching movies too.

The word 'hand' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'handy' which means convenient or useful. Hence, 'It's really handy for shopping and watching movies too.'

× I also needed it for a school work.

✓ I also needed it for school work.

The phrase 'a school work' is incorrect because 'work' is an uncountable noun and does not take the indefinite article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'school work' without 'a'.

× I always checking I always checking my social medias Facebook san emails.

✓ I am always checking my social media, Facebook, and emails.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous tense. Also, 'social medias' is incorrect; 'social media' is uncountable and does not take a plural form. 'San' is likely a typo for 'and'. The corrected sentence is 'I am always checking my social media, Facebook, and emails.'

× If there was no Internet, I will this spend more time outside.

✓ If there was no Internet, I would spend more time outside.

In conditional sentences referring to unreal or hypothetical situations in the present or future, the correct modal verb is 'would' not 'will'. Also, 'this' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct sentence is 'If there was no Internet, I would spend more time outside.'

× I think I spend too much time on lines.

✓ I think I spend too much time online.

The phrase 'on lines' is incorrect; the correct preposition and form is 'online' as one word. So, the sentence should be 'I think I spend too much time online.'

× I always checking my social medias Facebook san emails.

✓ I am always checking my social media, Facebook, and emails.

The verb 'checking' requires an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Without 'am', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. Also, 'social medias' should be 'social media' and 'san' is a typo for 'and'.

× Yes, I think I'll spend too much.

✓ Yes, I think I spend too much time online.

The sentence 'I think I'll spend too much' mixes future tense 'I'll' with the context of habitual action. The correct tense here is present simple 'I spend' to express habitual action. Also, 'too much' should be followed by what is spent too much, e.g., 'time online'.

× Even during power outage I could use my mobile data to stay connected.

✓ Even during a power outage, I could use my mobile data to stay connected.

The phrase 'power outage' is a countable noun and requires the article 'a'. Also, a comma after the introductory phrase improves clarity. The correct sentence is 'Even during a power outage, I could use my mobile data to stay connected.'

× I think it will be good to do more physical activities like cycling or playing in sports.

✓ I think it will be good to do more physical activities like cycling or playing sports.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'sports'. The correct phrase is 'playing sports'. Hence, the corrected sentence is 'I think it will be good to do more physical activities like cycling or playing sports.'