Internet— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时态使用不准确，应该使用过去时态描述过去的经历，且句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议练习使用正确的时态和完整句子表达时间点。

Example: I started using the Internet when I was a senior high school student because I got my first phone at that time.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Example: I go online every day because the Internet is an important part of my life. I use it to chat with my friends and play games with others.

Suggestion: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且词汇使用不当。建议学习正确的时态和词汇，表达原因时要完整清楚。

Example: When I was a child, my parents did not allow me to use the Internet because they thought it was bad for children.

Suggestion: 回答混乱，语法和词汇错误严重，句子不完整。建议练习简单句表达观点，并用连接词组织句子。

Example: No, I don't spend too much time online because I have a real life. I often go out with my friends and family, and I like to play sports.

Suggestion: 回答内容混乱，表达不连贯，缺乏逻辑。建议练习用完整句子表达假设情况，并说明理由。

Example: If I didn't have the Internet, I would spend more time with my friends and family. I think it would help me build closer relationships with them.

× I use the Internet when I was a Senior High School student.

✓ I used the Internet when I was a Senior High School student.

这里描述的是过去的动作，应该使用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时态'use'，与时间状语'when I was a Senior High School student'不匹配。

× I have my first phone. As that time.

✓ I had my first phone at that time.

原句结构不完整且时态错误。'I have'应改为过去时'had'，'As that time'应改为'at that time'，并合并为一句完整句子。

× Now I go on that every day you cause.

✓ Now I go online every day, of course.

'go on that'用法错误，应使用'go online'表示上网，'you cause'应为'of course'。

× The Internet is a important part, is an important part of my life.

✓ The Internet is an important part of my life.

'a important'中'a'应改为'an'因为important以元音音素开头，且句子重复，应合并为一句。

× I can chat with my friends on that and play games. With others.

✓ I can chat with my friends on it and play games with others.

'on that'应改为'on it'指代互联网，'With others.'为不完整句，应与前句合并。

× When I was a child, my parents don't allow me to use Internet because this thing is not.

✓ When I was a child, my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet because this thing is not good.

描述过去情况，动词应使用过去时'didn't allow'，且句子不完整，补充'good'使句子完整。

× Good is bad for children to use Internet to Ernie.

✓ It is bad for children to use the Internet to learn.

句子结构混乱，'Ernie'应为'learn'，且需加主语'It is'，'use Internet'前加定冠词'the'。

× No, I don't spend too much time on now be 'cause I have more since then the really life.

✓ No, I don't spend too much time online now because I have more real life activities since then.

'on now be'不合语法，应改为'online now'，'since then the really life'表达不清，改为'more real life activities since then'。

× And I where I can go out with my friends and I were my family means I will also like to play sports.

✓ I can go out with my friends and be with my family. I also like to play sports.

句子结构混乱，'where'和'were'用法错误，需拆分为两句，表达清晰。

× Give their E4. They have low Internet.

✓ If there is no Internet,

原句无意义且结构错误，推测意图为“如果没有互联网”，应改为'If there is no Internet,'。

× I will go out with my friends or spend time with my family and I think it can. In. Cancel the connection between. My family in. I was so.

✓ I will go out with my friends or spend time with my family. I think it can cancel the connection between me and my family, which is sad.

原句断断续续，缺少连贯性，'cancel the connection between'后应加宾语，补充完整句子并调整语序。