Internet— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，且信息表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达开始使用互联网的时间，并简要说明原因。

Example: I started using the Internet when I was about ten years old. It helped me a lot with my homework because there are many useful resources and lessons online.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和连接词，使句子更流畅。

Example: I go online every day because there are many interesting and useful resources on the Internet that help me with my studies.

Suggestion: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰，逻辑不够连贯。建议使用过去时态，明确表达父母禁止使用互联网的原因，并用连接词使句子连贯。

Example: When I was young, my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet for homework because they wanted me to understand the problems from my books. However, I disagreed because the Internet can help me learn new things.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误影响理解，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，正确使用介词和动词形式，并用连接词连接观点。

Example: I think I spend too much time on the Internet. Besides, I enjoy playing computer games, so I don't have enough time to focus on my studies.

Suggestion: 部分词汇使用不当，如"accounting my family"，表达不够准确。建议使用更合适的词汇，并保持句子简洁连贯。

Example: Without the Internet, I would spend more time with my family. We would have picnics outside and enjoy ourselves. Also, I would read more books and share interesting stories with them.

× I start using the Internet when I was a year old too.

✓ I started using the Internet when I was a year old too.

句子中描述的是过去的动作，应该使用过去时态。"start"应改为过去式"started"。

× So my problems in homework.

✓ So I have problems with my homework.

原句缺少主语和谓语，结构不完整。应补充主语"I"和谓语"have"，并使用介词"with"表示“在……方面有问题”。

× I study the new things through Internet.

✓ I study new things through the Internet.

Internet前应加定冠词"the"，且"new things"前不需要定冠词。

× there are many interesting and useful resources in Internet

✓ there are many interesting and useful resources on the Internet

表示在网络上时，介词应为"on"，且Internet前应加定冠词"the"。

× which are be helpful for myself for my study.

✓ which are helpful for me in my study.

"myself"用法错误，应该用宾格"me"，且"for my study"应改为"in my study"更自然。

× my parents don't allow me to use Internet to solve the problem from the homework.

✓ my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet to solve the problems from the homework.

描述过去的情况，助动词应使用过去式"didn't"，且Internet前应加定冠词"the"，"problem"应为复数"problems"。

× They want to me to understand the problems from my books.

✓ They want me to understand the problems from my books.

"want to me"结构错误，正确用法是"want me"。

× But I disagree because the Internet we can learn some new mentions.

✓ But I disagree because we can learn some new things from the Internet.

句子结构混乱，应调整为"we can learn some new things from the Internet"，"mentions"用词不当，应为"things"。

× I go online everyday because there are many interesting and useful resources in Internet

✓ I go online every day because there are many interesting and useful resources on the Internet

"everyday"是形容词，表示“日常的”，此处应使用副词短语"every day"表示“每天”，且Internet前应加定冠词"the"，介词应为"on"。

× my parents don't allow me to use Internet to solve the problem from the homework.

✓ my parents didn't allow me to use the Internet to solve the problems from the homework.

描述过去的情况，助动词应使用过去式"didn't"，且Internet前应加定冠词"the"，"problem"应为复数"problems"。

× Without the Internet, I will spend more time accounting my family.

✓ Without the Internet, I will spend more time with my family.

"accounting my family"用法错误，应使用介词短语"spend time with my family"表示“和家人在一起”。