Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách sử dụng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'there are Vietnamese in English' và sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I can speak two languages: Vietnamese and English. I am currently studying English because I believe it will be useful for my future, especially in my shop. English is a popular language, and I can use it when I travel to other countries.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ như 'because', 'however' để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi từ vựng không phù hợp như 'Farmer perspective'.

Example: From my perspective, learning a new language is difficult, especially at the beginning. When I first started studying English, I found it hard to speak clearly and understand native speakers. However, after continuous practice, I have improved significantly.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các cụm từ chính xác như 'Korean language' thay vì 'Korean language'.

Example: Actually, yes. In the future, I might learn Korean because I am a big fan of Korean movies. I want to understand what the actors are saying without subtitles.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời chính xác và tự nhiên hơn. Tránh lỗi như 'all of the prison' và sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng. Dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I learn English for many reasons. Firstly, English is widely spoken around the world, so it will be useful for me in the future. Moreover, knowing English can help me find better job opportunities and communicate with people from different countries. Also, it makes traveling abroad much easier.

× I can speak 2 languages. There are Vietnamese in English.

✓ I can speak 2 languages. They are Vietnamese and English.

The phrase 'There are Vietnamese in English' is incorrect because it misuses 'there are' and confuses the languages. The correct way is to say 'They are Vietnamese and English' to list the languages spoken.

× Now I am study English for my future because I think in the future I will always use English in my shop an English is a popular languages an when I go any country I can maybe use English.

✓ Now I am studying English for my future because I think in the future I will always use English in my shop. English is a popular language, and when I go to any country, I can maybe use English.

The verb 'study' should be in the present continuous form 'am studying' to indicate an ongoing action. 'Languages' should be singular 'language' when referring to English. Also, 'an' should be 'and', and 'go any country' should be 'go to any country' to use the correct preposition.

× when I go any country I can maybe use English.

✓ when I go to any country, I can maybe use English.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a destination. Omitting 'to' is incorrect.

× Farmer perspective I believe so because learning a new language can be quite challenging, especially at the beginning for assemble.

✓ From my perspective, I believe so because learning a new language can be quite challenging, especially at the beginning, for example.

'Farmer perspective' is a mishearing or typo for 'From my perspective'. 'For assemble' should be 'for example'. These are incorrect pronoun and word usage.

× When I first started studying English, I found is really difficult to speak clearly and understand native speaker.

✓ When I first started studying English, I found it really difficult to speak clearly and understand native speakers.

The pronoun 'is' is incorrect here; it should be 'it' as the subject of the clause. Also, 'native speaker' should be plural 'native speakers' to match the context.

× However, following tender M study, I think is our improved significant.

✓ However, following my study, I think I have improved significantly.

'Following tender M study' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'following my study'. 'I think is our improved significant' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I think I have improved significantly' to express the idea properly.

× Actually yes, in the future maybe I will learn Korean language because I am a big fan of Korea movies.

✓ Actually, yes, in the future maybe I will learn the Korean language because I am a big fan of Korean movies.

'Korean language' should be preceded by the definite article 'the'. 'Korea movies' should be 'Korean movies' to use the correct adjective form.

× So I want to learn Korean language because I want to understand what there is, what the address saying in the movie without the subtitle.

✓ So I want to learn the Korean language because I want to understand what is being said in the movie without the subtitles.

'What there is, what the address saying' is incorrect; it should be 'what is being said'. 'Subtitle' should be plural 'subtitles' as movies usually have multiple subtitles.

× I learn English for all of the prison.

✓ I learn English for all of the reasons.

'Prison' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'reasons'. This is a vocabulary error affecting meaning.

× Moreover, knowing English can help me find better job opportunities and communicate with people from different country.

✓ Moreover, knowing English can help me find better job opportunities and communicate with people from different countries.

'Country' should be plural 'countries' because 'people from different countries' is the correct expression.

× Also, is make traveling abroad much easier in mine sharable.

✓ Also, it makes traveling abroad much easier and more enjoyable for me.

'Is make' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes'. 'Mine sharable' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended to say 'more enjoyable for me' or similar.