Part 1
Examiner
What languages can you speak?
Candidate
I can't speak Chinese.
Examiner
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Candidate
Yes, I'm I'm I'm a Sakwa. So it's a it's a difficult to learn a new language.
Examiner
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Candidate
I want to learn English because I want to play. Go to America to play.
Examiner
Why do you learn English?
Candidate
Because our job I work in AUSA company.
What languages can you speak?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答不够完整,缺少对问题的直接回应和具体说明。建议直接回答自己会说的语言,并简要说明。
Example: I can speak English and a little bit of Spanish because I studied them at school.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答中有重复和语法错误,表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并给出原因。
Example: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because it requires a lot of practice and patience.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答不连贯,句子不完整。建议用完整句子表达意图,并说明原因。
Example: Yes, I want to learn English because I plan to travel to America and communicate with people there.
Why do you learn English?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答语法错误,表达不清楚。建议用完整句子说明学习英语的原因。
Example: I learn English because I work for an American company, so I need it for my job.
× Yes, I'm I'm I'm a Sakwa. So it's a it's a difficult to learn a new language.
✓ Yes, I'm a Sakwa. So it's difficult to learn a new language.
句子中多余的冠词“a”导致表达不自然,应去掉。"difficult"前不需要冠词。
× I want to learn English because I want to play. Go to America to play.
✓ I want to learn English because I want to go to America to play.
“play”后面不应单独成句,应与“go to America”连贯表达。原句中断句错误,导致意思不清。
× Because our job I work in AUSA company.
✓ Because of my job, I work in AUSA company.
“Because our job I work...”结构不完整,缺少介词短语,应改为“Because of my job”引导原因状语。