Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は自然ですが、文法や発音の違いについて話す際に、より具体的な例を挙げると良いでしょう。また、文の繋がりを明確にするために接続詞を使う練習をしましょう。

Example: I can only speak Japanese because it is my mother tongue. However, I am currently learning English, which is quite challenging because the sentence structure and pronunciation are very different from Japanese.

Suggestion: 「grammar」や「pronunciation」の前に冠詞を正しく使い、文をより自然にしましょう。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いです。

Example: Yes, I think learning new languages is very challenging because the grammar and pronunciation of Japanese are very unique, so many Japanese people find it difficult to learn other languages.

Suggestion: 「uh」などのフィラーを減らし、文を簡潔にしましょう。また、「dominant language」の前に冠詞を入れ、理由を明確に述べるために接続詞を使うと良いです。

Example: Yes, in the near future, I want to learn Spanish because I like football. However, my priority is learning English because it is a dominant language worldwide.

Suggestion: 理由を述べる際に文を分けて、より明確にしましょう。また、「earning a lot of money」よりも「improving career opportunities」などの表現を使うと自然です。

Example: I have been studying English for a long time because it is essential for improving career opportunities in modern society. This is especially important as globalization has accelerated rapidly in the past decade.

× sentences, pronunciations, grammars are very different from that in Japanese.

✓ sentences, pronunciations, and grammar are very different from those in Japanese.

'Grammar' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'grammars'. Also, when listing items, 'and' should be used before the last item. 'That' should be 'those' to refer to the plural items 'sentences' and 'pronunciations'.

× learning new languages is very challenging because a grammar or a pronunciation of Japanese is very unique, so it is difficult for many Japanese people to learn new ones.

✓ learning new languages is very challenging because the grammar and pronunciation of Japanese are very unique, so it is difficult for many Japanese people to learn new ones.

'Grammar' and 'pronunciation' are uncountable nouns and should not have articles 'a'. Also, 'grammar' and 'pronunciation' are plural in meaning here, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× But I think my priority is learning English because it is, uh, dominant language.

✓ But I think my priority is learning English because it is, uh, a dominant language.

The noun 'dominant language' requires the indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun and not previously specified.