Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は意味が伝わりにくく、文法的な誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。例えば、「started running it」や「second elementary school student」は誤用です。より自然で明確な表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

Example: I can speak English, which I started learning when I was in the second grade of elementary school. A friend invited me to join a local English school, and that's how I began studying the language.

Suggestion: 回答が不明瞭で、単語の誤用（"luggage it"など）や文法の誤りが多いです。意味を明確にし、具体的な理由を述べるために、正しい語彙と文法を使うことが重要です。

Example: Yes, I think learning a new language is very difficult because it requires regular practice, which can be hard for people who are busy and have little free time each day.

Suggestion: 回答は比較的明確ですが、繰り返しや文法の誤りがあります。より自然な表現を使い、理由を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

Example: To be honest, I want to learn a new language in the future. However, since translation apps are becoming popular, the importance of learning new languages seems to be decreasing. Therefore, I plan to focus on improving my English skills for now.

Suggestion: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文が途中で終わっており、繰り返しもあります。文を完結にし、具体的な理由や状況を詳しく述べると良いでしょう。

Example: I learn English because it helps me communicate effectively with my foreign clients. As a lawyer at a law firm with many international clients, I often need to review contracts written in English.

× I can speak English, which is the only language I can speak as I started running it when I was second elementary school student.

✓ I can speak English, which is the only language I can speak as I started learning it when I was a second grade elementary school student.

The verb 'running' is incorrectly used here; the correct verb is 'learning' to indicate acquiring a language. Also, 'second elementary school student' is unclear; it should be 'a second grade elementary school student' to specify the grade level.

× I started running it when I was second elementary school student.

✓ I started learning it when I was a second grade elementary school student.

The preposition 'when I was second elementary school student' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a second grade elementary school student' to correctly indicate the time and grade.

× Well, my friend invited me to attend the neighborhood English school and that's how I began my studies.

✓ Well, my friend invited me to attend the neighborhood English school, and that's how I began my studies.

A comma is needed before the conjunction 'and' when connecting two independent clauses to improve sentence clarity.

× Yes, I think it's very difficult to acquire a new luggage it and requires A relative practice which is very difficult to keep times for practicing for people who walks along hours every day.

✓ Yes, I think it's very difficult to acquire a new language and it requires a lot of practice, which is very difficult to find time for practicing for people who walk long hours every day.

The word 'luggage' is incorrect here; it should be 'language'. 'A relative practice' is incorrect; 'a lot of practice' is appropriate. 'Keep times' should be 'find time'. 'People who walks' should be 'people who walk'. 'Along hours' should be 'long hours'.

× people who walks along hours every day.

✓ people who walk long hours every day.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'walk' instead of 'walks'. Also, 'along hours' is incorrect; it should be 'long hours'.

× Well, to be honest, I want to learn a new language in the future.

✓ Well, to be honest, I would like to learn a new language in the future.

Using 'would like to' is more polite and appropriate when expressing future intentions or desires.

× Nowadays, translation apps become popular and the importance of learning new language is decreasing.

✓ Nowadays, translation apps have become popular and the importance of learning a new language is decreasing.

The present perfect tense 'have become' is appropriate to indicate a change that has occurred up to now. Also, 'learning new language' should be 'learning a new language'.

× the importance of learning new language is decreasing.

✓ the importance of learning a new language is decreasing.

The noun phrase 'new language' requires an article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× Instead, instead, I want to brush up my English skills.

✓ Instead, I want to brush up on my English skills.

The phrase 'brush up' requires the preposition 'on' after it. Also, the repetition of 'Instead' is unnecessary.

× Uh, it's because it allows me to communicate with my foreign clients efficiently.

✓ Uh, it's because English allows me to communicate with my foreign clients efficiently.

The pronoun 'it' is ambiguous here; specifying 'English' clarifies the subject.

× I work as a lawyer and our law firms, our law firm has a lot of foreign clients.

✓ I work as a lawyer and our law firm has a lot of foreign clients.

The phrase 'our law firms, our law firm' is inconsistent; it should be singular 'our law firm' to match the verb 'has'.

× I have to review contracts in English and.

✓ I have to review contracts in English.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought; removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.