Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có thể tự nhiên hơn bằng cách tránh lặp từ và thêm một số chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp lại cấu trúc "I can speak".

Example: I speak Vietnamese as my native language and have also learned English at school as a second language.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn đã khá chi tiết và có sử dụng ví dụ, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn, ví dụ như sửa "become confidence" thành "become confident". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I think learning a new language is quite difficult because it involves adapting to unfamiliar sounds and grammar rules. For instance, when I was learning English, I found it challenging to remember new vocabulary and use correct sentence structures. Moreover, it requires a lot of time, practice, and exposure to become confident in speaking and understanding.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn, ví dụ sửa "like in Chinese" thành "such as Chinese" và "second widely used language" thành "the second most widely used language". Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh câu quá dài.

Example: Yes, I plan to learn another language in the future, such as Chinese, because it is the second most widely used language in the world. I hope that learning it will help me improve my skills and academic performance.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn rất tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và nội dung đầy đủ. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa một số lỗi nhỏ như "English skill" thành "English skills" để tự nhiên hơn.

Example: I learn English because it is a compulsory subject at my school. Moreover, I want to communicate more easily with my friends and people around the world. Additionally, I believe that improving my English skills will help me find better job opportunities in the future and contribute to the development of my country, Vietnam.

× I can speak Vietnamese as my mother tongue and also English as a second language that I learn at school.

✓ I can speak Vietnamese as my mother tongue and also English as a second language that I am learning at school.

The verb 'learn' should be in the present participle form 'am learning' to indicate an ongoing action happening at the present time.

× For example, when I try to learn English, I found it challenging to remember new vocabulary and correct sentence structure.

✓ For example, when I try to learn English, I find it challenging to remember new vocabulary and correct sentence structure.

The verb 'found' is in the past tense, but the sentence context is present tense ('when I try'). Therefore, 'found' should be changed to 'find' to maintain tense consistency.

× Additionally, it takes a lot of time, practice, and exposure to become confidence in speaking and understanding.

✓ Additionally, it takes a lot of time, practice, and exposure to become confident in speaking and understanding.

The word 'confidence' is a noun, but the sentence requires the adjective 'confident' to describe the state of the subject.

× Yes, I have a plan to learn another language in the future like in Chinese because it is second widely used language in the world.

✓ Yes, I have a plan to learn another language in the future, like Chinese, because it is the second most widely used language in the world.

The preposition 'in' before 'Chinese' is incorrect; 'like Chinese' is the correct phrase. Also, the phrase 'second widely used language' is missing the superlative form 'second most widely used' and the definite article 'the' before 'second'.

× Yes, I have a plan to learn another language in the future like in Chinese because it is second widely used language in the world.

✓ Yes, I have a plan to learn another language in the future, like Chinese, because it is the second most widely used language in the world.

The phrase 'second widely used language' should be 'second most widely used language' to correctly express the superlative degree.

× So I wish I can use that to improve my skills, also my academic performance.

✓ So I wish I can use it to improve my skills, and also my academic performance.

The pronoun 'that' is less appropriate here; 'it' refers better to the previously mentioned language. Also, adding 'and' improves sentence flow.