Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了基本信息，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些冗余。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并避免重复表达。

Example: I can speak Chinese and English, but my English is not very good yet.

Suggestion: 回答直接且有例子支持，但句子结构较简单，且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议使用连接词并丰富细节。

Example: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult because, for example, I have studied English for about 18 years, yet I still find it hard to speak fluently.

Suggestion: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够清晰，且部分表达重复。建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: Probably not, because I want to improve my English first, especially my writing, listening, and speaking skills.

Suggestion: 回答内容明确，但语气词较多且表达略显简单。建议减少语气词，使用更丰富的词汇和句型。

Example: Firstly, I learn English to pass exams, and secondly, it helps me communicate with people from other countries.

× I can speak Chinese and English, but my English is not very well, just like now I show you.

✓ I can speak Chinese and English, but my English is not very good, just like now I show you.

这里“well”是副词，用来修饰动词，而句中需要形容词“good”来描述名词“English”的状态。应使用形容词“good”来表达英语水平不好。

× but until now I can't speak English very well.

✓ but until now I haven't been able to speak English very well.

这里表达从过去到现在的持续状态，使用一般现在时的“can't”不准确，应使用现在完成时“haven't been able to”来表示持续的能力缺失。

× Hmm, probably not because until now I can't speak English very well.

✓ Hmm, probably not because until now I haven't been able to speak English very well.

同上，表达持续的能力缺失，应使用现在完成时“haven't been able to”而非一般现在时“can't”。

× So I plan to learn English well in the future in writing, listening or my spoken English.

✓ So I plan to learn English well in the future in writing, listening, and speaking.

“my spoken English”用法不当，且“or”连接并列项不合适，应改为“and”连接“writing, listening, and speaking”，且用动名词形式保持一致。

× Then uh, we can use English to talk with foreigners.

✓ Then uh, we can use English to talk to foreigners.

“talk with”虽然有时可用，但更常见和标准的搭配是“talk to”，表示与某人交谈。