Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I can speak two languages: English and French." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: I can speak two languages: English and French. I have been learning English since grade 6, so I am quite confident, although I am not fluent yet. As for French, I have studied it for six months, so I can speak a little.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be specific about the difficulties you face when learning a new language.

Example: Yes, I think learning a new language is very difficult because it is quite different from my native language. Moreover, it challenges me with many problems and takes a lot of time. For example, when I first started learning English, I found it hard to understand the vocabulary and grammar.

Suggestion: Use plural forms correctly and improve clarity by structuring sentences better. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I will definitely learn other languages in the future because they will help me get opportunities to study abroad or do important things. Also, learning languages can help me get a better job. For example, I have realized that English is very important for getting chances in life.

Suggestion: Make your sentences clearer and more natural by simplifying and organizing your ideas. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: English is a second language that is very important for people. It helps them get opportunities to do important things in life and improve their knowledge. For example, English allows people to communicate well with foreigners and understand different cultures.

× I can speak two language.

✓ I can speak two languages.

The noun 'language' should be plural 'languages' because it refers to more than one language. In English, countable nouns require plural form when the quantity is more than one.

× There are English and French.

✓ They are English and French.

'There are' is used to indicate existence, but here the sentence lists languages the student can speak, so 'They are' is more appropriate to identify the languages.

× For English language I have learned since I was in grade 6, so I know English very well and I can speak but not influently.

✓ I have been learning English since I was in grade 6, so I know English very well and I can speak, but not fluently.

The phrase 'For English language' is incorrect; 'I have been learning English' is the correct present perfect continuous tense to express an action started in the past and continuing. Also, 'influently' is a misspelling; the correct adverb is 'fluently'.

× But for French I have learned for six months so I can speak a little.

✓ But I have been learning French for six months, so I can speak a little.

The sentence needs the subject 'I' at the beginning. The present perfect continuous tense 'have been learning' is appropriate to indicate an action started in the past and still ongoing. 'For six months' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate duration.

× Also it will challenge me to face with many problem and take times.

✓ Also, it will challenge me to face many problems and take time.

The phrase 'face with' is incorrect; 'face' does not require 'with'. 'Problem' should be plural 'problems' because it refers to multiple issues. 'Take times' should be 'take time' as 'time' is uncountable here.

× For example, when I first Start learning English, I find out that I cannot understand the vocabulary, grammar or.

✓ For example, when I first started learning English, I found out that I could not understand the vocabulary or grammar.

The verb 'Start' should be in past tense 'started' to match the past time reference. 'Find out' should be 'found out' for past tense consistency. 'Cannot' changes to 'could not' to reflect past ability. The sentence was incomplete; 'or' should be followed by 'grammar' only.

× Yes, I will definitely learn other language in the future because it would help me to get opportunity to study abroad or do something important.

✓ Yes, I will definitely learn other languages in the future because it would help me to get opportunities to study abroad or do something important.

'Other language' should be plural 'other languages' because it refers to more than one language. 'Opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities' to match the context of multiple chances.

× Also, it would allow me to get a better job in the future.

✓ Also, it would allow me to get a better job in the future.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× For example, I find out that English language is very important for me that I can get a chance.

✓ For example, I find out that the English language is very important for me so that I can get a chance.

'English language' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific language. The conjunction 'that' is better replaced by 'so that' to express purpose.

× While English is such a second language and I think it is very crucial for people because it can help them to get opportunity to do something important for their life and it's also to improve their knowledge as well.

✓ English is a second language, and I think it is very crucial for people because it can help them get opportunities to do something important in their lives and also improve their knowledge.

'While' is unnecessary and confusing here. 'Such a second language' is incorrect; 'a second language' is correct. 'Get opportunity' should be 'get opportunities' (plural). 'For their life' should be 'in their lives' to express the correct prepositional phrase.

× For example, it can help them to communicate well with the foreigner or understand the culture of different countries.

✓ For example, it can help them communicate well with foreigners or understand the cultures of different countries.

'The foreigner' should be plural 'foreigners' without 'the' to generalize. 'Culture' should be plural 'cultures' because it refers to multiple countries. 'Help them to communicate' can be simplified to 'help them communicate'.