Part 1
Examiner
What languages can you speak?
Candidate
Well, actually I'm born and raised in China, so my native language is Chinese, but I'm learning the English at present. So I could speak a little English, but not really well. But my familiar, my most familiar language is of course my native language is Chinese.
Examiner
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Candidate
Wow, for me I think it's really difficult to learn a new language. There are several reasons. The main reason is that I haven't enough time to learn a language because I need spend most of my time to work and study of my major.
Examiner
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Candidate
Wow, uh, in my opinion is several English. I wouldn't learn another language or more languages because I think it is not useful and helpful for my future. But if it is necessary to my future work, I think I will. I'm willing.
Examiner
Why do you learn English?
Candidate
Well actually the main reason I language is that I want to pursue opportunity in UK and the university that I that I submit requires us to have a English school such as the IELTS English English test in up to the school band.
What languages can you speak?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答时语言不够自然,有语法错误和重复,建议简化表达,避免重复,并注意冠词和词序的正确使用。
Example: I was born and raised in China, so my native language is Chinese. Currently, I am learning English and can speak it a little, but I'm not very fluent yet.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答结构基本合理,但语法错误较多,表达不够流畅。建议注意时态和介词的使用,丰富细节并使用连接词。
Example: Yes, I find learning a new language quite difficult because I don't have enough time. Most of my time is spent on work and studying my major, so it's hard to practice regularly.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答不够清晰,表达混乱且有语法错误。建议先明确观点,再用连词连接理由,避免口头语。
Example: I don't plan to learn other languages besides English because I don't think they will be useful for my future. However, if my job requires it, I am willing to learn.
Why do you learn English?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答语法错误严重,表达不连贯。建议先明确原因,再补充具体细节,注意句子完整和词汇准确。
Example: I learn English because I want to study in the UK. The university I applied to requires an English proficiency test like IELTS with a certain band score.
× but I'm learning the English at present.
✓ but I'm learning English at present.
在英语中,语言名称前通常不加定冠词“the”,除非特指某种情况。这里“English”作为语言名称,不需要加“the”。
× So I could speak a little English, but not really well.
✓ So I can speak a little English, but not really well.
这里表达现在能力,应该用情态动词“can”而非过去式“could”。
× But my familiar, my most familiar language is of course my native language is Chinese.
✓ But my most familiar language is, of course, my native language, Chinese.
句子结构混乱,重复使用“is”,需要调整语序和去除多余成分,使句子通顺。
× I haven't enough time to learn a language because I need spend most of my time to work and study of my major.
✓ I don't have enough time to learn a language because I need to spend most of my time working and studying my major.
“haven't enough time”不符合现代英语习惯,应使用“don't have enough time”。“need spend”缺少不定式“to”,且“study of my major”表达不正确,应改为“studying my major”。
× I need spend most of my time to work and study of my major.
✓ I need to spend most of my time working and studying my major.
动词“need”后应接不定式“to spend”。“study of my major”应改为动名词短语“studying my major”,且“to work”应改为“working”以保持并列结构。
× in my opinion is several English.
✓ In my opinion, English is enough.
原句语法混乱,缺少主语和谓语,且“several English”表达不当,应明确表达观点。
× I wouldn't learn another language or more languages because I think it is not useful and helpful for my future.
✓ I wouldn't learn another language or more languages because I think they are not useful or helpful for my future.
“it”指代不明确,应使用复数代词“they”指代“another language or more languages”。
× But if it is necessary to my future work, I think I will.
✓ But if it is necessary for my future work, I think I will.
“necessary”后应接介词“for”而非“to”。
× I'm willing.
✓ I'm willing to learn.
“I'm willing”后应补充动词不定式,表达完整意愿。
× the university that I that I submit requires us to have a English school such as the IELTS English English test in up to the school band.
✓ The university that I applied to requires us to have an English test such as the IELTS with a certain band score.
“a English”应为“an English”,且句子结构混乱,需调整为正确表达申请大学要求英语考试及分数的句子。