Part 1
Examiner
What languages can you speak?
Candidate
I speak English and Chinese. I studied these two languages in school from a very early age, and of course my native language is Chinese. And so I also learned to speak at home, like as a child, like most children.
Examiner
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Candidate
I think it actually depends on what the language is and whether you're familiar with the with the language family. I mean, if you're Chinese, then it's might be easier to learn Japanese than say German or Russian, because they share some characteristics in common, at least in the written form. So it really depends.
Examiner
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Candidate
Absolutely. Usually I like to explore other countries in the world, so I think if I want to truly know about them, I have to learn their cultures. And learning their cultures need requires me to learn their languages. So I will definitely learn new language in the future.
Examiner
Why do you learn English?
Candidate
Almost everyone from where I'm from learns English and it's also an important international languages of politics and business. So I think it's useful and important to read, write and speak English. So I think that's why people around me learns and speaks English.
What languages can you speak?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答较为冗长且部分内容重复,建议简化表达,避免重复信息,同时注意句子结构的连贯性。
Example: I can speak both English and Chinese. Chinese is my native language, and I started learning English at school from an early age.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: 回答内容具体且有逻辑,但有些语法错误和重复词汇,建议注意语法准确性和避免重复。
Example: It depends on the language and its similarity to your native tongue. For example, Japanese might be easier for Chinese speakers because they share some writing characteristics, unlike German or Russian.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够简洁,建议简化句子结构,注意语法准确性。
Example: Definitely. I enjoy exploring different countries, and to understand their cultures better, I plan to learn their languages in the future.
Why do you learn English?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达,建议使用更准确的语法和丰富词汇,避免重复。
Example: English is widely spoken in my country and is essential for international politics and business. Therefore, learning English helps me communicate effectively in these areas.
× learning their cultures need requires me to learn their languages.
✓ learning their cultures requires me to learn their languages.
这里的主语是单数形式的“learning their cultures”,谓语动词应使用单数形式“requires”。原句中“need”多余且错误,导致主谓不一致。建议去掉“need”,保持主谓一致。
× So I will definitely learn new language in the future.
✓ So I will definitely learn new languages in the future.
“language”前缺少冠词,且根据语境应使用复数形式“languages”,表示多种语言。单数形式缺少冠词会导致语法错误。建议使用复数形式以符合语境。
× it's also an important international languages of politics and business.
✓ it's also an important international language of politics and business.
“an”是单数不定冠词,后面应接单数名词,原句中“languages”是复数,导致冠词和名词不匹配。建议将“languages”改为单数“language”。
× So I think that's why people around me learns and speaks English.
✓ So I think that's why people around me learn and speak English.
“people”是复数名词,谓语动词应使用复数形式“learn”和“speak”,原句中使用了单数形式“learns”和“speaks”,主谓不一致。建议将动词改为复数形式。