Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and word choice. For example, say "Burmese is my mother tongue" instead of "mother thing". Also, keep the answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Example: I mainly speak Burmese, which is my mother tongue, and English is my second language.

Suggestion: Improve your answer by using correct vocabulary and grammar, and organize your ideas with linking words. For example, use "learn" instead of "lend", "vocabulary" instead of "vocabularies", and add linking words like "because" and "also" to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Learning a new language is not easy because you have to learn many different and difficult grammatical rules. Also, memorizing new vocabulary and pronouncing a new accent can be challenging.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use conditional sentences correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words like "because" and "therefore" to connect ideas logically.

Example: No, I will not try to learn other languages in the future because English is a global language. If I become advanced in English, I can communicate with people all over the world. Therefore, I will focus on improving my English instead of learning new languages.

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like "uh" and make your answer more fluent. Also, use more precise vocabulary such as "international student" and "essential skills". Keep your answer clear and concise.

Example: I learn English because I am an international student studying abroad. I need to use English for my studies and to communicate with my classmates. Therefore, English is essential in my daily life.

× I mainly speak Burmese to communicate in my daily life as is my mother thing and English is my second language.

✓ I mainly speak Burmese to communicate in my daily life as it is my mother tongue and English is my second language.

The phrase 'mother thing' is incorrect; the correct term is 'mother tongue' which means the native language. Also, 'as is' should be 'as it is' to be grammatically correct.

× Learning a new language is not an easy task because you need to lend many different and difficult new grammatical rules and you need to also memorize new vocabularies and pronouncing a new accent will be also challenging.

✓ Learning a new language is not an easy task because you need to learn many different and difficult new grammatical rules, and you also need to memorize new vocabulary, and pronouncing a new accent will also be challenging.

The word 'lend' is incorrect; it should be 'learn'. 'Vocabularies' is incorrect because 'vocabulary' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× No, I will not try to learn other languages in the future. Since English is a global language, I if I were advanced in it, I can communicate with people all over the world even though I don't know other languages.

✓ No, I will not try to learn other languages in the future. Since English is a global language, if I were advanced in it, I could communicate with people all over the world even though I don't know other languages.

The modal verb 'can' is incorrect in this conditional sentence. In the second conditional, 'could' should be used to express hypothetical ability. Also, the phrase 'I if I were' has an extra 'I' which should be removed.

× Therefore, English is one of my essential items in my daily life.

✓ Therefore, English is one of the essential things in my daily life.

The word 'items' is not appropriate here; 'things' is more natural. Also, 'my essential items' is awkward; 'the essential things' is better to express importance in daily life.