Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ: "I took part" thay vì "I have took part") và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "learned new language help me". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I speak Vietnamese as my mother tongue. Besides, I can speak English fluently because I took part in an English course three years ago. Learning a new language has helped me become more confident and communicate more easily.

Suggestion: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời bằng cách tránh câu bị bỏ dở và sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy thêm ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Example: Yes, of course. I think learning a new language is difficult because I have to remember a lot of pronunciation rules and vocabulary. Besides, I need to spend a lot of time practicing speaking and listening to improve my skills.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần được hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "It's help me talk". Bạn nên sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

Example: In the future, if I have free time, I will learn Chinese because it is the second most popular language in the world. Learning it will give me more career opportunities with a higher salary. It will also help me communicate with more people.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời. Ví dụ, "It's help me" nên là "It helps me". Ngoài ra, câu "I can get scholarship to study approach" không rõ nghĩa, bạn nên diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Example: I think learning English is very important for me. It helps me feel more confident when talking with foreigners or traveling abroad. Also, it allows me to apply for scholarships to study overseas. Besides, it opens up more career opportunities with higher salaries.

× Beside I can speak English fluently because I have took part in English college three years ago.

✓ Besides, I can speak English fluently because I took part in an English college three years ago.

The word 'Beside' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'Besides' to mean 'in addition'. Also, 'have took' is incorrect; the past tense of 'take' is 'took', and since the time is specified ('three years ago'), simple past tense should be used instead of present perfect. Additionally, 'English college' needs an article 'an' before it.

× I have took part in English college three years ago.

✓ I took part in an English college three years ago.

When a specific time in the past is mentioned ('three years ago'), the simple past tense should be used instead of present perfect. Also, 'have took' is incorrect; the correct past tense form is 'took'.

× I think learned new language help me more confident and easy.

✓ I think learning a new language helps me be more confident and makes things easier.

The sentence lacks proper verb forms and articles. 'Learned' should be 'learning' (gerund) to act as the subject. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject. 'More confident and easy' is incorrect; it should be 'more confident' and 'makes things easier' to express the idea clearly.

× Besides, I must spend more time to practice or.

✓ Besides, I must spend more time practicing.

The phrase 'spend more time to practice' is incorrect; after 'spend time', the verb should be in the '-ing' form ('practicing'). The sentence ends abruptly with 'or', which is incomplete and should be removed.

× I can have more career opportunities with high salary.

✓ I can have more career opportunities with a high salary.

The phrase 'with high salary' is missing the article 'a' before 'high salary'. Also, 'high salary' is a noun phrase and needs an article to be grammatically correct.

× It's help me talk.

✓ It helps me to communicate.

'It's' is a contraction of 'it is', which does not fit here. The correct form is 'It helps me'. Also, 'talk' is vague; 'communicate' is more appropriate. The verb 'help' should be followed by 'to' plus base verb or just base verb.

× It's help me more confident when talking with foreigner or traveling abroad.

✓ It helps me be more confident when talking with foreigners or traveling abroad.

'It's' should be 'It helps'. 'More confident' needs the verb 'be' before it. 'Foreigner' should be plural 'foreigners' to match the context.

× I can get scholarship to study approach.

✓ I can get a scholarship to study abroad.

The phrase 'study approach' is incorrect; likely intended is 'study abroad'. Also, 'scholarship' needs the article 'a' before it.

× Besides I can get more career opportunities with high.

✓ Besides, I can get more career opportunities with a high salary.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'high'. It should be completed as 'with a high salary' to be grammatically correct and meaningful.