Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は基本的な情報を伝えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「I can learn a bit French」は「I can speak a bit of French」や「I am learning a bit of French」が自然です。また、「I can run a lot」は文脈に合わず意味が不明瞭です。より明確で自然な表現を心がけ、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。

Example: I can speak English and Japanese fluently. I am also learning a bit of French because I am studying at a French university. Most of my courses are in English, but I also attend a French class to improve my skills.

Suggestion: 内容は伝わりますが、文法ミスや不自然な表現が多いです。例えば、「Japanese is totally differences with all languages」は「Japanese is totally different from other languages」が正しい表現です。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使い、論理的に繋げると良いでしょう。

Example: Yes, I think learning a new language is difficult, especially for Japanese people. This is because Japanese is very different from other languages, as it does not use an alphabet. Therefore, it can be quite challenging to learn new languages.

Suggestion: 回答が少し混乱しており、文法や語彙の誤りがあります。例えば、「my friends skill is not good enough」は「my French skills are not good enough」が正しいです。また、理由を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

Example: Yes, I am planning to improve my French in the future because I study at a French university and take French classes. Currently, my French skills are not good enough to take all courses in French, so I want to get better.

Suggestion: 理由を述べる際に、文を分けて明確にすると良いです。また、「I'm jealous」はカジュアルすぎるため、「I admire their skills」などの表現が適切です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、自然な流れを作りましょう。

Example: I learn English because I want to communicate with more people. One reason I started learning English seriously is because my friends speak English very well, and I admire their skills.

× I'm currently studying in French university and I'm taking all courses in English and I have a French class as well so I can run a lot.

✓ I'm currently studying at a French university and I'm taking all courses in English, and I have a French class as well, so I can learn a lot.

The phrase 'run a lot' is incorrect in this context; the student likely meant 'learn a lot'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to studying at a university. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I think it is difficult to learn a new language especially for Japanese because Japanese is totally differences with all languages because Japanese don't use alphabets.

✓ Yes, I think it is difficult to learn a new language especially for Japanese because Japanese is totally different from all languages because Japanese doesn't use alphabets.

The word 'differences' should be the adjective 'different' to describe Japanese. Also, 'differences with' should be 'different from'. Additionally, 'Japanese don't use' should be 'Japanese doesn't use' because 'Japanese' here is treated as singular.

× because Japanese don't use alphabets.

✓ because Japanese doesn't use alphabets.

The subject 'Japanese' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't' to agree in number.

× Yes I I am planning to learn French in the future because I'm studying in French university and I have a French class but my friends skill is not good enough to take courses in French so I wanna improve it.

✓ Yes, I am planning to learn French in the future because I'm studying at a French university and I have a French class, but my friend's skill is not good enough to take courses in French, so I want to improve it.

The phrase 'wanna' is informal and should be 'want to' in formal speech. Also, 'friends skill' should be 'friend's skill' to show possession. The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to a university.

× I'm currently studying in French university and I'm taking all courses in English and I have a French class as well so I can run a lot.

✓ I'm currently studying at a French university and I'm taking all courses in English, and I have a French class as well, so I can learn a lot.

The correct preposition for attending a university is 'at' not 'in'. Also, the sentence needed commas for clarity.

× my friends skill is not good enough to take courses in French so I wanna improve it.

✓ my friend's skill is not good enough to take courses in French, so I want to improve it.

The phrase 'friends skill' lacks the possessive apostrophe; it should be 'friend's skill' to indicate possession.

× I'm studying in French university and I have a French class but my friends skill is not good enough to take courses in French so I wanna improve it.

✓ I'm studying at a French university and I have a French class, but my friend's skill is not good enough to take courses in French, so I want to improve it.

The preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to studying at a university.

× Some of my friends can speak English so well and I'm jealous.

✓ Some of my friends can speak English so well, and I'm jealous.

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate the two independent clauses for clarity.