Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and keep your response within 5 sentences.

Example: I can speak Chinese and English fluently, and I know a little Japanese. Currently, I'm working on improving my English skills because I want to communicate more effectively. After this exam, I plan to continue learning English throughout my life and also explore other languages.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Use clearer vocabulary and linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, be specific about why learning a language is difficult and how you feel when you overcome challenges.

Example: Yes, learning a new language is challenging because grammar rules and vocabulary can be hard to remember. However, when I manage to understand these aspects, I feel a great sense of achievement and pride.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more structured and formal. Avoid filler words like 'Umm' and informal phrases such as 'you know'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific plans.

Example: Yes, I definitely plan to learn Japanese in the future. If I have enough free time and motivation, I will enrol in online classes to learn it more effectively, rather than just spending time on leisure activities.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat informal and contains filler words. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain your reasons. Also, be more specific about how your interests motivate you to learn English.

Example: I learn English because I enjoy watching American TV series, such as The Shameless. This interest motivates me to improve my language skills so that I can understand the shows better without subtitles.

× At the present, I'm not good at speaking English, so I try to improve my English.

✓ At present, I'm not good at speaking English, so I am trying to improve my English.

The phrase 'At the present' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'At present'. Also, 'I try to improve my English' should be in the present continuous tense 'I am trying to improve my English' to indicate an ongoing action.

× After taking this exam, I will learn it during my whole life, and also I would like to learn more.

✓ After taking this exam, I will continue learning it throughout my whole life, and I would also like to learn more.

The phrase 'I will learn it during my whole life' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'I will continue learning it throughout my whole life' to express a lifelong ongoing action. Also, 'and also I would like to learn more' is better as 'and I would also like to learn more' for smoother conjunction.

× But sometimes when I try to figure out them all, I will feel a sense of treatment and feel proud.

✓ But sometimes when I try to figure them all out, I feel a sense of achievement and feel proud.

The pronoun 'them' should be placed after the verb phrase 'figure out' as 'figure them all out'. Also, 'a sense of treatment' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a sense of achievement'. Additionally, 'I will feel' is better as 'I feel' to express a general truth or habitual feeling.

× I will decide to sign up for some classes online so I could learn it effectively.

✓ I will decide to sign up for some classes online so I can learn it effectively.

The modal verb 'could' is incorrect here because it expresses past ability or conditional mood. The correct modal verb is 'can' to express ability in the future or present context.