Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating the languages you speak and the reason for learning English. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

Example: I speak Japanese as my mother tongue and have basic English communication skills. I've been studying English for over 10 years because I want to communicate with people from other countries.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains repetition. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific reasons, using linking words to improve coherence.

Example: For me, learning a new language is difficult because despite studying English for over 10 years, I haven't yet achieved the score required for permanent residency. However, I am determined to improve with this first attempt.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to directly answer the question with clear reasons and avoid irrelevant information. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I'm not certain if I will learn other languages, but in the near future, I would like to study Spanish because I enjoy Spanish food, especially churros.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear and concise response with a topic sentence followed by supporting details, using correct grammar and linking words.

Example: I learn English because I want to experience new cultures and communicate with new people. Additionally, my cousin inspired me to start learning the language.

× I would say my mother tongue Japanese and also the basic communication skill of English.

✓ I would say my mother tongue is Japanese and I also have basic communication skills in English.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'mother tongue' and uses 'skill of English' incorrectly. The correct preposition is 'in' for language skills, and 'skills' should be plural to match 'basic communication skills.'

× I've been studying English for more than 10 years but it because I wanted to talk with other countries people.

✓ I've been studying English for more than 10 years because I wanted to talk with people from other countries.

The phrase 'but it because' is incorrect and causes sentence structure errors. Also, 'other countries people' should be 'people from other countries' to use the correct prepositional phrase.

× I've been studying English for more than 10 years but I cannot achieve my English score which I need to get to get permanent residency and this is my first attempt.

✓ I've been studying English for more than 10 years but I cannot achieve the English score I need to get permanent residency, and this is my first attempt.

The phrase 'to get to get' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'my English score which I need' is better expressed as 'the English score I need' for clarity and correctness.

× I'm not sure about that because I don't have any specific hobbies like watching sports, but I would say near future I want to study Spanish because I love to ask Spanish food, especially chores.

✓ I'm not sure about that because I don't have any specific hobbies like watching sports, but I would say in the near future I want to study Spanish because I love to eat Spanish food, especially churros.

The phrase 'near future' needs the preposition 'in' to be correct. 'Love to ask Spanish food' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'eat.' Also, 'chores' is a misspelling of 'churros,' a Spanish food.

× Because I wanted to learn new culture and talk to new people, I started I have I started learning English is because of my influence of my cousin.

✓ I started learning English because I wanted to learn a new culture and talk to new people; it was because of the influence of my cousin.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive ('I started I have I started'). The corrected sentence combines ideas clearly and uses proper sentence structure. 'New culture' should be 'a new culture,' and 'my influence of my cousin' should be 'the influence of my cousin.'