Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add supporting details with linking words.

Example: I can speak Thai fluently since it is my native language. Additionally, I have basic English skills that help me communicate during work or travel.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I think learning a new language is quite difficult, especially because I started learning it as an adult. However, with practice, it becomes easier over time.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically, using linking words to connect your points. Avoid vague phrases and be specific.

Example: Yes, I plan to learn other languages in the future because nowadays, knowing multiple languages is important for communicating with people worldwide. Besides English, I want to learn a third language to improve my skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use clearer sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

Example: I learn English because it is a global language spoken by many people. Since English is everywhere in the world, it is important to know it for communication and daily life.

× I'm Thai so I literally can speak Thai of course, and I can't speak English in the level of communication.

✓ I'm Thai, so I can literally speak Thai, of course, and I can't speak English at the level of communication.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'the level of communication'. The correct preposition is 'at' when referring to a level or standard. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× Yes I do, it's quite difficult for me to learn the news language, especially when I start to learn when I adult.

✓ Yes, I do. It's quite difficult for me to learn a new language, especially since I started learning when I was an adult.

The word 'news' is incorrect; it should be 'new' as an adjective describing 'language'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and missing auxiliary verbs; 'start to learn when I adult' is incorrect and should be 'started learning when I was an adult'. Commas and periods are added for clarity.

× Yes, I will, because this day the language is important to communicate with the other people in the world, even though the English you have to know about a third language.

✓ Yes, I will, because nowadays language is important to communicate with other people in the world, and you have to know English as a third language.

The phrase 'this day' is incorrect; 'nowadays' or 'these days' is appropriate. 'The language' should be 'language' without 'the' because it's general. 'The other people' should be 'other people' without 'the'. The phrase 'even though the English you have to know about a third language' is unclear and incorrect; it is corrected to 'you have to know English as a third language' for clarity and correctness.

× I learn English because it's a global language like most of the people can speak English.

✓ I learn English because it's a global language, and most people can speak English.

The phrase 'like most of the people can speak English' is incorrect. 'Like' is not appropriate here; 'and' is better to connect the two clauses. Also, 'most of the people' is better as 'most people' in this context.

× Even to live in this world, the English is all around you, so it is important to know English language.

✓ Even living in this world, English is all around you, so it is important to know the English language.

The phrase 'Even to live in this world' is awkward; 'Even living in this world' is better. 'The English is all around you' should be 'English is all around you' without 'the'. Also, 'English language' should be preceded by 'the' to specify the language.