Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains filler words like 'uh' which affect fluency. Try to give a clear and concise response with a topic sentence followed by specific details. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Example: I can speak four languages fluently. For example, I use them to communicate with people from different countries and express my feelings effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'there is a late'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more precise in your explanation.

Example: I don't think learning a new language is very difficult. Although it can be challenging at the beginning, after a few weeks or months it becomes easier. Moreover, speaking with native speakers is the best way to improve.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and unclear phrases like 'Italian friends Germany languages'. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary to specify the languages you want to learn.

Example: Yes, I definitely plan to learn new languages in the future because I enjoy traveling. For instance, I want to learn Italian and German to communicate better when I visit those countries.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide a clear reason why you learn English. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure.

Example: I learn English because it is the most widely spoken language in the world. Additionally, since I enjoy traveling, knowing English helps me communicate easily in many countries.

× I can speak 4 languages and uh, and uh, I get in touch the other countries people.

✓ I can speak 4 languages and uh, and uh, I get in touch with people from other countries.

The phrase 'the other countries people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and should be preceded by 'from' to indicate origin. Also, 'the other countries people' is awkward; the correct preposition is 'with' to indicate contact. The corrected phrase is 'get in touch with people from other countries.'

× I get in touch the other countries people.

✓ I get in touch with people from other countries.

The verb phrase 'get in touch' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate the person or group contacted. Also, 'the other countries people' is incorrect; it should be 'people from other countries' to correctly express origin.

× So I know though I know their language and also I can express my feeling in the four languages.

✓ So I know their language and also I can express my feelings in the four languages.

The phrase 'though I know' is redundant and confusing here. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' because it refers to emotions in general. Removing 'though I know' clarifies the sentence.

× I can express my feeling in the four languages.

✓ I can express my feelings in the four languages.

The word 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' because it refers to multiple emotions or expressions, which is more natural in this context.

× there is a late. There is difficult in the beginning,

✓ there is a delay. It is difficult in the beginning,

The phrase 'there is a late' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'delay.' Also, 'There is difficult' is incorrect; 'difficult' is an adjective and needs a subject like 'It is difficult.'

× the best way to learn a new language to talk to other people, it helps to improve their language.

✓ the best way to learn a new language is to talk to other people; it helps to improve your language.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'the best way.' Also, 'their language' is ambiguous; 'your language' is more appropriate as it refers to the learner's language skills. A semicolon improves sentence clarity.

× I will try to learn new languages in the future because I want I like traveling and I want to go to the other countries, so I want to learn Italian friends Germany languages.

✓ I will try to learn new languages in the future because I like traveling and I want to go to other countries, so I want to learn Italian, French, and German languages.

The phrase 'I want I like traveling' is incorrect; 'I like traveling' suffices. 'The other countries' should be 'other countries' without 'the.' Also, 'Italian friends Germany languages' is incorrect; it should be 'Italian, French, and German languages.'

× I want I like traveling and I want to go to the other countries, so I want to learn Italian friends Germany languages.

✓ I like traveling and I want to go to other countries, so I want to learn Italian, French, and German languages.

The phrase 'I want I like traveling' is a conjunction error; 'I like traveling' is sufficient. Also, 'the other countries' should be 'other countries' without 'the.' The list of languages needs commas and 'and' for clarity.

× At the moment the English is the popular language in the world, so so and also lots of people can speak.

✓ At the moment, English is the most popular language in the world, and also lots of people can speak it.

'The English' is incorrect; 'English' as a language does not take 'the.' 'The popular language' should be 'the most popular language' for superlative. The phrase 'so so' is redundant and removed. 'Can speak' needs an object 'it' to clarify.

× If I I mentioned above I like traveling, it helps me by traveling.

✓ As I mentioned above, I like traveling; it helps me when I travel.

The sentence has repetition 'If I I' and awkward structure. 'If' is incorrect here; 'As' or 'As I mentioned above' is better. 'It helps me by traveling' is unclear; 'it helps me when I travel' is clearer.