Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more accurate and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct plurals and verb forms, reduce hesitations, and add one specific detail. Use linking words like “also” or “besides” to connect ideas. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: I can speak two languages fluently: Vietnamese and English. Besides those, I can speak a little Korean and some Chinese, which helps me access more job and learning opportunities.

Suggestion: Organize your answer: give a clear opinion first, then one or two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., “because” or “however”). Correct grammar—use present/past continuous appropriately—and avoid repeating phrases.

Example: Yes, I think learning a new language can be difficult because you make many mistakes at the beginning and need time to build vocabulary. However, with regular practice and speaking with native speakers, I expect I will improve significantly.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer then support with a reason and specific details. Use correct country/language names and grammar (China → Chinese, Korea → Korean). Use linking words like “because” to explain motivation.

Example: Yes, I plan to learn two more languages in the future: Chinese and Korean, because both are widely spoken in business and pop culture. Learning them will increase my career opportunities and help me travel more easily.

Suggestion: Answer clearly with one main reason and support it with a specific example. Use correct grammar (e.g., “it opens up many opportunities”) and avoid repetition. Keep it concise and natural.

Example: I learn English because it opens up many job and salary opportunities; for example, being fluent allowed me to apply for international internships that I otherwise could not.

× I can speak uh, two language is umm, Vietnamese and English.

✓ I can speak, um, two languages: Vietnamese and English.

The noun 'language' should be plural 'languages' because it refers to more than one. Also remove extra words 'is' and adjust punctuation. Suggestion: use 'two languages' and a colon to list them.

× Also I can speak a little bit Korea and uh, Chinese.

✓ Also I can speak a little Korean and Chinese.

Use the adjective form 'Korean' instead of the noun 'Korea' when describing ability to speak a language. No article is needed; 'a little' modifies the adjective. Suggestion: say 'a little Korean and Chinese.'

× I think when I learn new language, I, it's helped me a lot when I find out the opportunities.

✓ I think learning new languages has helped me a lot when I look for opportunities.

Sentence structure is awkward and tense/mood mix is incorrect. Use the gerund 'learning' for general statements and present perfect 'has helped' to show past influence on present. 'Find out the opportunities' is unnatural; use 'look for opportunities.'

× Certainly when I learn new language, I miss a lot of mistake and I think it's very difficult when I learned and I think in the future I will improve a lot when I learn this new language.

✓ Certainly, when I learn a new language, I make a lot of mistakes, and I think it's very difficult, but I believe I will improve a lot in the future as I keep learning this new language.

Multiple tense and verb choice errors: 'learn' should be 'learn a new language' with article; 'miss a lot of mistake' should be 'make a lot of mistakes' (wrong verb and singular/plural). 'When I learned' mixes past with general statement; use present continuous or general present. Use 'in the future' and 'improve' appropriately. Suggestion: use 'make mistakes' and consistent tenses.

× Shortlies in the futures. I will learn two language like Chinas and Korea.

✓ Soon in the future, I will learn two languages, such as Chinese and Korean.

'Shortlies' is incorrect; use 'Soon'. 'Futures' should be singular 'future'. 'Two language' needs plural 'languages'. 'Chinas' and 'Korea' are incorrect forms; use adjectives 'Chinese' and 'Korean' or nouns 'Chinese' and 'Korean' for languages. Suggestion: 'Soon, I will learn two languages, such as Chinese and Korean.'

× I think it's very famous and popular in the futures and I think it's will help me a lot.

✓ I think they are very popular in the future and I think they will help me a lot.

'It's' refers to singular and is incorrect for plural 'languages'; change to 'they'. 'Futures' should be 'future'. 'It's will' is ungrammatical; use 'they will'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct future tense formation.

× Actually is I thinks English have me a lot when I want to find out the opportunities, it's opens in myself a lot of opportunities about the salaries and jobs and I think it will good for us somebody who want to learn.

✓ Actually, I think English has helped me a lot when I want to find opportunities; it opens up many possibilities for better salaries and jobs, and I think it is good for anyone who wants to learn it.

Multiple errors: remove extraneous 'is', use 'I think' not 'I thinks'. Use present perfect 'has helped' rather than 'have me a lot'. 'Find out the opportunities' should be 'find opportunities'. 'Opens in myself a lot of opportunities' is unidiomatic; use 'opens up many possibilities'. 'It will good' needs 'it is good' and 'somebody who want' should be 'anyone who wants'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct verb forms and collocations like 'opens up opportunities' and ensure subject-verb agreement.