Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu và phát âm để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn; trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: bắt đầu bằng chủ đề "I can speak..."; tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ hợp lý.

Example: I can speak English. I practise it every day to improve my speaking and listening skills, so I’m excited to talk about it. For example, I listen to English podcasts and speak with friends online.

Suggestion: Sắp xếp lại ý theo trình tự logic, dùng liên từ để liệt kê khó khăn và đưa ví dụ cụ thể; sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (thời và trật tự từ). Trả lời nên gồm một câu chủ đề và 1–2 câu hỗ trợ.

Example: Yes, I think learning a new language can be difficult. The main challenges for me are grammar and pronunciation, and I need regular practice to improve. For instance, I often struggle with English verb tenses and native-like sounds.

Suggestion: Trả lời cần rõ ràng mục tiêu và lí do; tránh lặp và sửa ngữ pháp (e.g. "learn another language" vs "learn more languages"). Nên nêu một ngôn ngữ cụ thể nếu có và phương pháp học rõ ràng.

Example: Yes, I plan to learn more languages in the future. For example, I want to study Spanish because it could help me at university and when travelling, and I will practise by listening to podcasts and taking online lessons.

Suggestion: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu lí do cụ thể và ví dụ. Tránh từ thừa như "uh" và sắp xếp từ đúng (e.g. "international" đủ). Cụ thể hoá các cơ hội nghề nghiệp hoặc học tập bạn hướng tới.

Example: I learn English because it’s an international language that opens up career and study opportunities. For example, good English skills can help me get a job at an international company or study abroad, so I practise daily by reading articles and speaking with classmates.

× This language I can speak English.

✓ I can speak English.

The original sentence has incorrect word order; the subject and object are confused. Use Subject + Verb + Object: 'I can speak English.' This corrects sentence structure and sounds natural. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Every day I try to my best to improve my English, so I'm so excited to talk about it to you.

✓ Every day I try my best to improve my English, so I am very excited to talk about it with you.

Remove the incorrect 'to' after 'try' and use 'my best' without a preposition. Use 'very' instead of repeated 'so'. Use 'talk about it with you' for correct preposition use. Grammar problem type ID:8 and 11 (primary:8).

× I think it will be difficult it to learn a new language, a new language send grammar, pronunciation, skilled and I need to learn it always, so it's so difficult for me.

✓ I think it will be difficult to learn a new language; a new language involves grammar, pronunciation, and skills, and I need to keep learning it, so it is difficult for me.

Remove the extra 'it' after 'difficult'. Use 'involves' to describe components of a language and plural 'skills'. Replace 'always' with 'keep learning' to indicate continuous effort. Fix punctuation and conjunctions for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26.

× Yes, I in the future, I will learn another language English because it's a opportunity in school and child in the future.

✓ Yes, in the future I will learn another language, such as English, because it is an opportunity for school and for my children in the future.

Place time expression 'in the future' correctly and remove misplaced subject repetition. Use 'such as' to give an example, 'an opportunity' requires 'an' and clarify 'for my children'. Grammar problem type ID:26 and 22 (primary:26).

× Uh, for example, uh, I tried, uh, improved my English everyday live listening.

✓ For example, I try to improve my English every day by listening to live broadcasts.

Use present tense 'try' to match habitual action. Replace 'tried, improved' with 'try to improve'. Use 'every day' as two words and add the preposition 'by' with 'listening to' and clarify 'live broadcasts' or 'live listening practice'. Grammar problem type ID:6 and 8 (primary:6).

× Because English is an international worldwide language, uh, it will open up career and job in the future opportunities.

✓ Because English is an international language, it will open up career and job opportunities in the future.

'International' already conveys 'worldwide' so choose one. Use 'career and job opportunities' (noun phrase order) and place 'in the future' at the end. Remove filler 'uh'. Grammar problem type ID:26.

× For example, I tried to improve my English every day.

✓ For example, I try to improve my English every day.

Use present simple 'try' for habitual action rather than past 'tried'. This matches the context of routine practice. Grammar problem type ID:6.