Part 1
Examiner
What languages can you speak?
Candidate
And the first one must be my native and the Chinese. And now I'm studying English now and I think it's pretty challenger for me to study English since I was a poor skilled at this at English all the time.
Examiner
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Candidate
Yes, of course I totally forgot uh, confused to learn the English since I I have a poor skill of speaking and listening. I practice my English every day and uh, it's really hard.
Examiner
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Candidate
Yes, maybe if I have an extra time to focus myself I can learn more about the other languages. Maybe I want to study French or Korean. I don't have a real idea.
Examiner
Why do you learn English?
Candidate
Uh, to tell the truth in master pass the ITC exam and I want to, uh, study abroad and uh, you know, English is the uh, most widely used in the country in the world, so learn it is very convenience.
What languages can you speak?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答不够直接且有多处语法和词汇错误,句子重复且结构混乱。建议先用一句明确的主题句直接回答问题(例如:‘I speak Chinese and I am learning English.’),然后用1-2句补充细节。注意时态和词汇拼写(challenging, poor at English),避免重复短语。可练习使用简单连接词(and, but, because)使句子更连贯。
Example: I speak Chinese as my native language, and I am currently learning English. I find English challenging because I have always been weak in listening and speaking, so I practice every day to improve.
Do you think it is difficult to learn a new language?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答表意明确但表达不自然,填充词较多(uh, um),有语法问题(totally forgot/confused 用法不当)。建议先给出直接回答,然后用一个原因和一个例子支持观点,减少停顿词并使用连接词(because, so)。改正词汇搭配(poor at speaking and listening)。
Example: Yes, I think it is difficult because learning a language requires improving both listening and speaking skills. For example, I practice English every day, but I still find it hard to understand fast conversations.
Will you learn other languages in the future?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答较为自然但有冗余和语法小错(extra time, focus on myself, I don't have a real idea)。建议用一句肯定或否定句开头,再用一两句说明原因或列举选项并说明优先顺序。避免模糊表达,使用更自然的短语(have spare time, focus on studying)。
Example: Yes, I would like to learn other languages if I have spare time. I am thinking about French or Korean because French is useful for travel and Korean interests me because of its culture and media.
Why do you learn English?
Score: 48.0Suggestion: 回答包含几个目的但表达混乱且有语法错误(‘in master pass the ITC exam’ unclear, 'most widely used in the country in the world' wrong phrasing, 'convenience' wrong form). 建议先列出主要原因(例如:to pass exams, to study abroad, because it is widely used),每个原因用简短清晰的句子解释并用连接词(so, because)衔接,避免填充词。
Example: I learn English mainly to pass important exams and to study abroad. Also, English is widely used internationally, so it makes traveling and working with people from other countries much easier.
× And the first one must be my native and the Chinese.
✓ The first one is my native language, Chinese.
原句代词和名词搭配不当。“my native and the Chinese”结构混乱;应明确说“my native language, Chinese”。建议在表达母语时使用“my native language”并用逗号或从句补充具体语言。
× And now I'm studying English now and I think it's pretty challenger for me to study English since I was a poor skilled at this at English all the time.
✓ Now I'm studying English, and I think it's pretty challenging for me to learn English since I have always been poor at it.
原句时态与词形错误:1) 重复使用 now;2) 'challenger' 应为形容词 'challenging'(形容词误用);3) 表达过去一直缺乏技能应使用现在完成时 'have always been poor' 而不是过去时 'was';4) 'skilled at this at English' 结构错误,正确为 'poor at it' 或 'poor at English'。建议使用现在进行时描述当前学习,用现在完成时描述过去到现在的持续情况。
× Yes, of course I totally forgot uh, confused to learn the English since I I have a poor skill of speaking and listening.
✓ Yes, of course I often feel confused about learning English because I have poor speaking and listening skills.
原句句子结构混乱:1) 'totally forgot' 与语境不符,应为 'feel confused';2) 不定式 'to learn the English' 用法不当,通常说 'learning English' 或 'about learning English';3) 'a poor skill of speaking and listening' 名词、冠词和可数性错误,正确为复数 'poor speaking and listening skills' 或 'poor skill in speaking and listening'。建议使用固定搭配 'feel confused about' 和复数形式 'skills'。
× I practice my English every day and uh, it's really hard.
✓ I practice English every day, and it's really hard.
原句中的 'my English' 可接受但在此更常见、更自然的是 'practice English';时态为一般现在,描述习惯动作,使用正确。建议保持一般现在时并简化主语所有格。
× Yes, maybe if I have an extra time to focus myself I can learn more about the other languages.
✓ Yes, maybe if I have extra time to focus on myself, I can learn more languages.
原句中 'an extra time' 与 'extra time' 搭配错误;'focus myself' 用法不自然,正确为 'focus on myself';'learn more about the other languages' 冗长且定冠词 'the' 不必要,应为 'learn more languages'。条件句时态正确(一般现在表将来可能性),但需修正介词和冠词用法。
× Maybe I want to study French or Korean.
✓ Maybe I want to study French or Korean.
句子语法正确,但语气可更自然用 'Maybe I'd like to study French or Korean.' 不属于必须修正的错误。此处只给出说明,保持原句。
× I don't have a real idea.
✓ I don't have a clear idea.
原句用词不当 'a real idea' 不自然,应该用 'a clear idea' 或 'no idea' 来表达不确定。建议使用更地道的搭配 'a clear idea'。
× Uh, to tell the truth in master pass the ITC exam and I want to, uh, study abroad and uh, you know, English is the uh, most widely used in the country in the world, so learn it is very convenience.
✓ To tell the truth, I want to pass the IELTS exam and study abroad. You know, English is the most widely used language in the world, so learning it is very convenient.
原句有多处结构与用词错误:1) 'in master pass the ITC exam' 完全不通,推测为 'pass the IELTS exam'(或相似考试),应使用不定式 'I want to pass...';2) 句子缺少连接与标点,应拆成两句;3) 'the most widely used in the country in the world' 错误重复并缺少名词,正确为 'the most widely used language in the world';4) 'learn it is very convenience' 中 'learn' 应为动名词 'learning','convenience' 应为形容词 'convenient'。建议使用清晰的句子分割,正确名词和动词形式。