Language— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct pronunciation and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence listing languages, then give one brief supporting detail about how you learned or use each language. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g., 'itta' → 'a bit of', 'I learn' → 'I learned' or 'I’m learning').

Example: I speak three languages. My native language is Chinese, I can also speak a bit of English which I use at work, and I’m learning Italian by myself because I love Italian culture and travel there.

Suggestion: Organize your answer with a clear opinion and 1–2 specific reasons, using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'a very difficult' → 'very difficult', remove repetitions). Replace vague phrases like 'it is not all the sensible' with a clear concluding statement.

Example: Yes, I think learning a new language is very difficult, especially speaking, because you need regular practice and a speaking environment. For example, without conversations it’s hard to improve pronunciation and fluency.

Suggestion: Give a concise direct answer, then add specific details about which languages and why, and correct word choices (use country adjectives or language names correctly: 'German, French and Spanish'). Avoid repeating words like 'definitely' twice.

Example: Yes, I will. I plan to learn German, French and Spanish because I love exploring other cultures and these languages are useful for travel and work in Europe.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid filler words. State the main reason and give a specific example of how English helps you. Use smoother phrasing ('more important' → 'more importantly') and correct infinitive use ('make it easier to watch').

Example: I learn English because I love English films and TV series. More importantly, knowing English makes it much easier to enjoy them without subtitles and to understand cultural references.

× Well, firstly, I can speak my native language that is Chinese and then I can speak a little bit English.

✓ Well, firstly, I can speak my native language, which is Chinese, and I can speak a little bit of English.

The sentence uses 'that is' awkwardly; use the relative pronoun 'which' to add non-restrictive information and commas to set it off. Also include the preposition 'of' with 'a little bit' when referring to a language: 'a little bit of English.' Use parallel structure for the two clauses: 'I can speak... and I can speak...' improves clarity.

× That's why I'm talking to you right now.

✓ That's why I'm speaking to you right now.

'Talking to' is not wrong, but in a formal speaking-test context 'speaking to' matches the register. No grammatical error category exactly matches; present progressive is appropriate. Use 'speaking' for consistency with the topic (languages).

× Thirdly, I think I can speak a little, a little, a little itta Italian that is Italiano in Italian, because I like Italy very much and I learn it by myself.

✓ Thirdly, I think I can speak a little Italian (Italiano), because I like Italy very much and I learned it by myself.

Remove repeated 'a little' and the misspelled 'itta.' Use 'Italian' as the English adjective/noun; parenthetical 'Italiano' is fine. The clause 'I learn it by myself' refers to a past action of learning up to now, so past tense 'learned' or present perfect 'have learned' is more appropriate. This correction addresses adjective/adverb misuse and verb tense.

× in my opinion learning a new language is a very difficult, especially the speaking speaking part because I which is also the most important part because you sometimes you need to have a environment environment to speak in order to improve your overall ability.

✓ In my opinion, learning a new language is very difficult, especially the speaking part, which is also the most important, because sometimes you need an environment to speak in order to improve your overall ability.

Remove the article error and repetition: 'a very difficult' should be 'very difficult' (adjective modifies noun 'task' omitted) and the repeated words removed. Use 'which' correctly to introduce a relative clause. 'A environment' should be 'an environment' (article before vowel sound). Also reorder 'speak in' to keep 'in' with 'environment' or place 'in order to' after 'speak.' This corrects present tense phrasing and article use.

× But it is not all the sensible.

✓ But that is not entirely sensible.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Not all the sensible' mixes determiners incorrectly. Replace with 'not entirely sensible' to convey the intended meaning. This corrects sentence structure and word choice.

× I think I will definitely learn more new languages in my future because I just love learning new languages and because I want to explore more cultures around the world.

✓ I will definitely learn more languages in the future because I love learning new languages and want to explore cultures around the world.

'In my future' is non-idiomatic; use 'in the future.' 'More new languages' is redundant — 'more languages' or 'new languages' suffice. Remove repetitive 'because' clauses for conciseness. Tense 'will' is fine for future plans.

× For example, Germany, French, Spanish are all the new languages I'm willing to learn in my future.

✓ For example, German, French, and Spanish are all languages I'm willing to learn in the future.

Use adjectives/nouns correctly: 'German' (not 'Germany') to name the language. Include 'and' in the list. Again, 'in my future' -> 'in the future.' Remove 'the new' which is unnecessary here.

× Because I love English. Umm, and more important, more importantly, I just, I'm a super fan of English movies and uh, uh, English TV series, and by learning English it can be more easy for me to to watch those movies without subtitles etcetera.

✓ Because I love English. More importantly, I'm a big fan of English movies and TV series, and learning English makes it easier for me to watch those films without subtitles.

Fragment 'Because I love English.' can stand as a short answer but better integrated; keep 'More importantly' once. 'Super fan' is informal; 'a big fan' is more natural. 'By learning English it can be more easy for me' is ungrammatical: use 'learning English makes it easier for me' (subject + verb). Remove duplicate 'to' and 'etcetera' — be specific. This corrects pronoun/reference and sentence structure.