Birthday— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.

Example: I usually celebrate my birthday at home with my family. My grandparents and parents decorate the house according to the design I choose, which makes the day very special. We enjoy delicious cakes, cookies, and a variety of drinks together. Afterwards, I often visit my close friends to continue the celebration.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại các từ như "beautiful" nhiều lần. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm phong phú nội dung.

Example: When I was young, I used to create decoration designs for my house and gave them to my grandparents and parents to decorate. Then, I would buy birthday cakes, cookies, and drinks that made me happy. I also enjoyed visiting my friends to celebrate together.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần được tổ chức tốt hơn với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và các chi tiết hỗ trợ logic. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên.

Example: Yes, I believe celebrating my birthday is very important. It is a special day for me to relax and reflect on my life. Everyone has their own birthday, which symbolizes their unique journey in the world. Therefore, celebrating this day helps me appreciate my existence and look forward to the future.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về Trung Quốc hoặc nếu không biết thì nên nói rõ và trả lời ngắn gọn. Tránh lạc đề và đảm bảo câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

Example: I'm not very familiar with birthday celebrations in China, so I can't say whose birthday is the most important there. However, in Vietnam, we celebrate National Day on September 2nd, which is very important to everyone as it marks our country's independence.

× My grandparents and my parents decorated the house by the design that I give them.

✓ My grandparents and my parents decorated the house with the design that I gave them.

The verb 'give' should be in the past tense 'gave' to match the past tense context of the sentence. Also, the preposition 'by' is incorrect here; 'with' is the correct preposition to indicate the means or instrument used for decorating.

× It was very special and happy time.

✓ It was a very special and happy time.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very special and happy time' because 'time' is a countable noun here. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I usually buy some cakes or birthday cakes, cookies, many beautiful drinks and visit every.

✓ I usually buy some cakes or birthday cakes, cookies, many beautiful drinks, and visit everyone.

The phrase 'visit every' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'visit everyone' to indicate visiting all people. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in the list for clarity.

× When I was young I usually made a beautiful design about my houses and gave it to my grandparents and my parents to decorate.

✓ When I was young, I usually made a beautiful design for my house and gave it to my grandparents and my parents to decorate.

The phrase 'about my houses' is incorrect; it should be 'for my house' to indicate the design was intended for the house. Also, a comma after 'When I was young' improves sentence clarity.

× Then I bought some beautiful cakes or like birthday cakes or cookies or beautiful drinks which make me feel very happy and I usually visited my friends.

✓ Then I bought some beautiful cakes, like birthday cakes, cookies, or beautiful drinks which made me feel very happy, and I usually visited my friends.

The sentence uses 'or' repeatedly where commas and 'or' should be used properly to list items. Also, 'make' should be 'made' to match past tense. Adding commas improves readability.

× It's the day that I have time to relax, to express myself and happy when I was born on that time.

✓ It's the day that I have time to relax, to express myself, and to be happy because I was born on that day.

The phrase 'and happy' is incomplete; it should be 'and to be happy' to parallel the previous infinitive verbs. Also, 'when I was born on that time' is awkward; 'because I was born on that day' is clearer.

× Because everyone have their own birthday when they were born like that's like that they have a chance to explore about the world.

✓ Because everyone has their own birthday when they were born, which means they have a chance to explore the world.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'everyone'. The phrase 'like that's like that' is unclear and should be replaced with 'which means'. Also, 'explore about the world' should be 'explore the world'.

× Well, I'm not familiar with the celebration in China, but in Vietnam we usually celebrate the National Day on the 2nd of September, which very important for everyone in our country.

✓ Well, I'm not familiar with the celebrations in China, but in Vietnam, we usually celebrate National Day on the 2nd of September, which is very important for everyone in our country.

'Celebration' should be plural 'celebrations' to refer to general events. 'Which very important' is missing the verb 'is'. Also, a comma after 'Vietnam' improves clarity.

× It marks the country independent and our government often gives people money as a gift.

✓ It marks the country's independence, and our government often gives people money as a gift.

'Country independent' is incorrect; it should be 'country's independence' to use the noun form. Also, a comma before 'and' separates two independent clauses.

× This day brings families.

✓ This day brings families together.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'together' completes the meaning, indicating that the day unites families.