Relax— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb tense and article errors (e.g., 'my balcony', 'it gives me inner happiness').

Example: Lately I relax on my balcony. I usually sit in a chair and watch the street and trees, which helps me unwind after a busy day. For example, seeing people walk and birds in the trees gives me a sense of calm and reduces my stress.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly (who), then explain if you relax alone or with others. Correct grammar and avoid irrelevant phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about how you use meditation.

Example: I usually relax by myself rather than with other people. I practise meditation on my balcony and often play guided meditation tracks through earphones, which helps me focus on my breathing and calm my mind.

Suggestion: Good clear opinion. Improve by combining sentences and using more precise vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'one of the best ways', 'helps me relax'). Give a specific example of when or what you listen to.

Example: Yes, definitely. Music is one of the best ways for me to relax. For example, after work I usually play soft jazz or calming instrumental playlists because their slow tempo helps me unwind and lower my stress.

Suggestion: Organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and linked supporting details. Use correct connectors (first, second, finally) and fix grammar (e.g., 'a hobby', 'I try new recipes'). Be specific about types of books or dishes to add content richness.

Example: I relax in several ways. First, I sit on my balcony and listen to music to clear my mind. Second, I read fiction novels because they help me escape into another world. Finally, I enjoy cooking new recipes, especially simple comfort dishes, which makes me feel relaxed and accomplished.

× I always sit down in my balcony.

✓ I always sit down on my balcony.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect for 'balcony'. Use 'on' with balcony to show location. Also this fits common usage: 'sit on my balcony.'

× Whenever I sit on a chair in my balcony, I always watch the outside world.

✓ Whenever I sit on a chair on my balcony, I always watch the outside world.

Same preposition issue: use 'on my balcony'. 'Outside world' is acceptable, but ensure 'on a chair on my balcony' for correct preposition usage.

× It gave me internal internal happiness and pleasant and reduce my whole stress of the day.

✓ It gives me inner happiness, makes me feel pleasant, and reduces my stress for the whole day.

The original uses past 'gave' but context is habitual present so use present 'gives'. 'Internal internal' is repetition and wrong collocation; use 'inner happiness'. 'Reduce' needs subject and agreement: 'reduces my stress'. Also reorder and add linking verbs for clarity.

× The best way for me to relax myself it is the meditation.

✓ The best way for me to relax is meditation.

Redundant pronoun 'myself' and extra 'it is' make the sentence ungrammatical. 'Meditation' is an uncountable noun here, so use 'is meditation' or 'is to meditate'.

× As I have mentioned earlier that I sit outside in my balcony.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I sit outside on my balcony.

Use 'on my balcony' not 'in'. Also streamline 'As I mentioned earlier' and remove unnecessary 'that' for correct clause structure.

× Sometimes I turn on the meditation songs and air started listening to them on my ear plugs.

✓ Sometimes I turn on meditation songs and start listening to them with my earplugs.

Place verbs in correct form: 'start listening' instead of 'started listening'. Remove 'air' which is incorrect. Use 'with my earplugs' rather than 'on my ear plugs'. Also 'meditation songs' without 'the' is fine.

× This gives me a sense of relaxation.

✓ This gives me a sense of relaxation.

Sentence is correct; present simple is appropriate for habitual experience. No change needed.

× In my case, definitely.

✓ In my case, definitely.

Short answer is acceptable in context; present simple 'definitely' is fine. No grammatical change required.

× I believe that music is one of the best way to relax myself.

✓ I believe that music is one of the best ways to relax me.

'Way' should be plural 'ways' after 'one of the'. 'Relax myself' is awkward in English; use 'relax me' or 'help me relax'.

× Whenever I come back from work after a long day, I always listen to the music.

✓ Whenever I come back from work after a long day, I always listen to music.

Drop the definite article 'the' before 'music' because speaking generally about music does not need 'the'.

× It depends on my mood whether I would love to listen to the romantic, calming or jazz music, which helps me to reduce.

✓ It depends on my mood whether I want to listen to romantic, calming, or jazz music, which helps me relax.

Use 'want to' instead of 'would love to' in this habitual context. Remove 'the' before genres. 'Helps me to reduce' is incomplete; use 'helps me relax.' Also correct list punctuation.

× I choose various options to relax myself.

✓ I choose various ways to relax.

'Options' is not wrong but 'ways' is more natural collocation with 'relax'. Remove 'myself' because reflexive is unnecessary here.

× First of all, I always sit outside on my balcony and start listening to music.

✓ First of all, I always sit outside on my balcony and start listening to music.

Sentence is grammatically correct; present simple consistent for habitual actions. No change needed.

× Secondly, I love reading books because it gives me a sense of relaxation.

✓ Secondly, I love reading books because they give me a sense of relaxation.

'Books' is plural so the pronoun should be 'they' and verb 'give' plural. 'It gives' incorrectly treats 'books' as singular.

× And the last, cooking is one of my best hobby.

✓ And lastly, cooking is one of my best hobbies.

Use 'lastly' for sequence. 'One of my best hobby' needs plural 'hobbies' after 'one of my'. Also 'the last' is awkward here.

× I whenever I have a new recipe I love to try.

✓ Whenever I have a new recipe, I love to try it.

Remove the extra initial 'I'. Add comma after the subordinate clause. Include object 'it' after 'try' to complete the verb phrase.