Cakes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and coherent by directly answering the question and providing clear reasons. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

Example: I like eating cakes more than other sweet foods because I love baking them myself. Since I have a child, I often bake cakes at home, which makes me enjoy them even more.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains some vocabulary mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct words and link your ideas smoothly. Also, clarify your points with specific examples.

Example: I am from Nepal, so we don't have traditional Chinese cakes here. We usually eat cakes only on special occasions like parties or weddings. However, we have our own traditional sweets, such as 'celery', which is a type of rice cake enjoyed during festivals.

Suggestion: Your answer has many grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Try to organize your ideas logically and use simple, correct sentences. Avoid confusing phrases and focus on clear communication.

Example: Yes, I love making cakes. I have been interested in baking since I was a child. Even though I don't know how to cook other dishes well, I enjoy baking cakes by myself and sharing them with my friends.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to incorrect grammar and unclear phrases. Use simple past tense correctly and express your ideas clearly with proper vocabulary.

Example: I loved eating cakes a lot when I was a child because I had a sweet tooth. I was also interested in baking cakes from a young age, which was a fun experience for me.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains inappropriate expressions. Try to answer directly and use natural phrases to express your opinion clearly.

Example: Yes, I like having desserts after meals. Even if I am full, I enjoy eating a small dessert because it makes the meal more enjoyable.

× In addition cake others cake lovers since I have a child and I love to bake cake also.

✓ In addition, like other cake lovers, since I have a child, I love to bake cakes as well.

The original sentence misuses conjunctions and lacks proper connectors, making it unclear. Adding commas and conjunctions like 'like' and 'as well' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually I'm from Nepal and we don't have traditional Chinese cakes here in Nepal.

✓ Actually, I'm from Nepal and we don't have traditional Chinese cakes here.

Repeating 'in Nepal' is redundant after stating 'I'm from Nepal'. Removing the second mention improves sentence flow and correctness.

× However, we do have our own traditional suites such as celery which is a type of rice cake enjoyed during fest.

✓ However, we do have our own traditional sweets such as 'sel roti', which is a type of rice cake enjoyed during festivals.

The word 'suites' is incorrect; it should be 'sweets'. Also, 'celery' is incorrect; the traditional Nepali rice cake is 'sel roti'. 'Fest' should be 'festivals'. Correcting these improves accuracy and clarity.

× I used to go in the kitchen and to sleep make it, you know, Even though I don't know how to cook bed, I was really interested in baking.

✓ I used to go into the kitchen and try to make it, you know. Even though I didn't know how to cook well, I was really interested in baking.

The preposition 'in' should be 'into' when indicating movement. 'To sleep make it' is incorrect and unclear; 'try to make it' is appropriate. 'Cook bed' is a typo for 'cook well'. These corrections fix prepositional and vocabulary errors.

× I really love to bake by myself and keep to my friends in there.

✓ I really love to bake by myself and share with my friends there.

'Keep to my friends in there' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'share with my friends there'. Correcting the phrase clarifies the meaning.

× As I remember, I used to love cake a lot whenever I'm AT child because I was really a sweet tooth and also I love making cakes.

✓ As I remember, I used to love cake a lot when I was a child because I was really a sweet tooth and also I loved making cakes.

'Whenever I'm AT child' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a child'. Also, 'I love making cakes' should be in past tense 'I loved making cakes' to match the past context.

× However, I have been interested in baking since our child pickers.

✓ However, I have been interested in baking since I was a child.

'Since our child pickers' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'since I was a child' to indicate the time period.

× I enjoy experience.

✓ I enjoy the experience.

The sentence lacks an article before 'experience'. Adding 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Definitely is the one of my favorite part when having meals even if I am full but one dessert can make my stomach blast.

✓ Definitely, it is one of my favorite parts of having meals. Even if I am full, one dessert can make my stomach burst.

The original sentence lacks a subject ('it') and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'it' and restructuring improves clarity. 'Stomach blast' is incorrect; 'stomach burst' or 'stomach feel full' is more appropriate.