Cakes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly and provide specific reasons for your preferences.

Example: I sometimes enjoy eating cakes or sweet foods, but only on special occasions like birthdays or during my period because I try to manage my weight.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly first, then add relevant details. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid unclear terms. For example, clarify the name of the cake and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I'm not familiar with traditional Chinese cakes, but in Korea, we have rice cakes called 'tteok'. I especially like the honey-flavoured ones because they are very sweet and delicious.

Suggestion: Provide a clear and direct answer first, then explain briefly. Avoid unclear phrases and improve grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: No, I can't make cakes because I have never learned how to bake. Therefore, I usually buy desserts from shops instead.

Suggestion: Make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Provide specific details to enrich your response.

Example: When I was a child, I loved eating single pieces of cake because a whole cake was too big for me. I enjoyed the small portions as they were delicious and easy to eat.

Suggestion: Clarify your ideas and use appropriate vocabulary. Avoid unclear expressions like 'scary feelings'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific examples.

Example: It depends on the situation. If I have eaten enough food, I don't need dessert, but when I feel stressed, I like to eat fruits or sugary foods after meals because they make me feel satisfied.

× Sometimes I enjoy eating cakes or sweet foods but it just a special day such as I have period or some others birthday party in daily life.

✓ Sometimes I enjoy eating cakes or sweet foods but only on special days such as when I have my period or at some other birthday parties in daily life.

The modal verb 'just' is incorrectly used here; 'only' is more appropriate to express limitation. Also, 'it just a special day' lacks a verb and should be 'only on special days'. Additionally, 'I have period' needs the possessive 'my' and 'some others birthday party' should be 'some other birthday parties' to match plural form and possessive usage.

× Sometimes I enjoy eating cakes or sweet foods but it just a special day such as I have period or some others birthday party in daily life.

✓ Sometimes I enjoy eating cakes or sweet foods but only on special days such as when I have my period or at some other birthday parties in daily life.

The phrase 'some others birthday party' is incorrect; it should be 'some other birthday parties' to correctly use the plural form and adjective 'other' without 's'. Also, 'cakes' and 'sweet foods' are correctly plural here.

× Sometimes I enjoy eating cakes or sweet foods but it just a special day such as I have period or some others birthday party in daily life.

✓ Sometimes I enjoy eating cakes or sweet foods but only on special days such as when I have my period or at some other birthday parties in daily life.

The preposition 'in daily life' is awkward here; 'in daily life' is acceptable but 'on special days' is more precise. Also, 'such as I have period' needs 'when I have my period' to correctly use the preposition and possessive pronoun.

× I really like wood duck because it have honey, so very sweet.

✓ I really like wood duck because it has honey, so it is very sweet.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the third person singular subject 'it'. Also, 'so very sweet' is incomplete and should be 'so it is very sweet' for clarity.

× No, I've never learned about cooking some cakes and sugar food.

✓ No, I've never learned how to cook cakes and sugary food.

The phrase 'learned about cooking some cakes and sugar food' is awkward. The modal verb 'how to' is needed to express learning the skill of cooking. Also, 'sugar food' should be 'sugary food' as an adjective.

× I mean, I think I wasn't good at baking.

✓ I mean, I think I wasn't good at baking.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× Yeah. So I just bought Shibali food in shops, that dessert store like this.

✓ Yeah. So I just bought Shibali food in shops, at dessert stores like this.

The phrase 'that dessert store like this' is incorrect; it should be 'at dessert stores like this' to correctly use plural and preposition.

× When I was a child, I like I really loved to eating one pieces cake because a full cake is very big.

✓ When I was a child, I really loved eating one piece of cake because a full cake is very big.

The verb 'like' is unnecessary and confusing here. 'Loved to eating' is incorrect; it should be 'loved eating'. 'One pieces cake' should be 'one piece of cake' to use singular form and correct quantifier.

× When I was a child, I like I really loved to eating one pieces cake because a full cake is very big.

✓ When I was a child, I really loved eating one piece of cake because a full cake is very big.

'One pieces cake' is incorrect; 'pieces' is plural but 'one' requires singular 'piece'. Also, 'cake' after 'piece' needs the preposition 'of'.

× So I don't I didn't eat all of them, but one piece cakes is very small so I really love to eat them.

✓ So I didn't eat all of it, but one piece of cake is very small so I really loved to eat it.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'I don't I didn't' is redundant; 'I didn't' suffices. 'One piece cakes' should be 'one piece of cake' (singular). Also, 'love' should be past tense 'loved' to match past context.

× So I don't I didn't eat all of them, but one piece cakes is very small so I really love to eat them.

✓ So I didn't eat all of it, but one piece of cake is very small so I really loved to eat it.

The quantifier 'all of them' is incorrect because 'cake' is uncountable or singular here; 'all of it' is appropriate. Also, 'one piece cakes' is incorrect; it should be 'one piece of cake'.

× So I don't I didn't eat all of them, but one piece cakes is very small so I really love to eat them.

✓ So I didn't eat all of it, but one piece of cake is very small so I really loved to eat it.

The pronouns 'them' are incorrect because 'cake' is singular here; 'it' should be used instead.

× It depends on the situation, if I have some food I don't need anything after meals, but if I feel some scary feelings I I eat more something fruits and sugary foods after meals because it makes me feel satisfied.

✓ It depends on the situation; if I have enough food, I don't need anything after meals, but if I feel some anxious feelings, I eat more fruits and sugary foods after meals because it makes me feel satisfied.

The phrase 'some scary feelings' is incorrect; 'anxious feelings' or 'stress' is more appropriate. 'I I eat more something fruits' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I eat more fruits'. Also, 'some food' should be 'enough food' for clarity.