Cakes— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，且有重复表达。建议简化句子，避免冗余，使用更地道的表达方式。

Example: Yes, I really enjoy eating sweet foods. They make me feel satisfied and improve my mood. After a busy day, I often buy a cake as a reward, which helps me relax.

Suggestion: 回答不够直接且表达不清晰，有语法错误和重复词汇。建议直接回答问题，并用简洁的句子表达自己的观点。

Example: I'm not very familiar with traditional Chinese cakes because I usually eat Western cakes. So, I don't know much about Chinese cakes.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，且句子较长且重复。建议使用简洁明了的句子，注意时态和表达的准确性。

Example: No, I can't make cakes. When I was a child, I wanted to learn how to cook and bake cakes because I love eating sweet food, but I haven't learned how to do it well.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，且句子结构重复。建议注意主谓一致，使用更自然的表达方式。

Example: Yes, I definitely liked eating sweet foods like cakes when I was a child. I felt happy and relaxed eating them, but my mom didn't allow me to eat too much because she thought they had too much sugar and fat.

Suggestion: 回答表达不够连贯，语法错误较多，且句子结构混乱。建议使用连贯的句子，注意语法和逻辑连接。

Example: Yes, I like to have some dessert after meals because it helps me feel less oily. However, I often feel too full after eating, so sometimes I don't have enough room for dessert.

× I feel like I was satisfied and have higher mood whenever I eat sweet things.

✓ I feel like I am satisfied and have a higher mood whenever I eat sweet things.

这里的时态应该保持一致，描述的是现在的感觉，所以用一般现在时。原句中使用了过去时"was"，不符合语境。

× I usually buy some cake to reward me after a busy day and I feel relaxed when I eat cakes and smooth foods.

✓ I usually buy some cake to reward myself after a busy day and I feel relaxed when I eat cakes and smooth foods.

"cake"作为不可数名词时不加复数形式，"reward me"应改为"reward myself"，因为是反身动作。

× I usually buy some cake to reward me after a busy day and I feel relaxed when I eat cakes and smooth foods.

✓ I usually buy some cake to reward myself after a busy day and I feel relaxed when I eat cakes and smooth foods.

"reward me"中的"me"应使用反身代词"myself"，因为动作的承受者和执行者是同一人。

× Sorry, actually I don't have idea on it because umm, whenever I educate, I usually ate some Western cakes and umm, not Chinese cakes, yeah, so I don't have much idea on it, sorry.

✓ Sorry, actually I don't have an idea about it because umm, whenever I study, I usually eat some Western cakes and umm, not Chinese cakes, yeah, so I don't have much idea about it, sorry.

"have idea on"应改为"have an idea about"，"educate"用错，应为"study"，时态也应保持一致。

× whenever I educate, I usually ate some Western cakes and umm, not Chinese cakes, yeah, so I don't have much idea on it, sorry.

✓ whenever I studied, I usually ate some Western cakes and umm, not Chinese cakes, yeah, so I didn't have much idea about it, sorry.

描述过去的习惯动作，时态应统一为过去时。

× Sorry, actually I don't have idea on it because umm, whenever I educate, I usually ate some Western cakes and umm, not Chinese cakes, yeah, so I don't have much idea on it, sorry.

✓ Sorry, actually I don't have an idea about it because umm, whenever I studied, I usually ate some Western cakes and umm, not Chinese cakes, yeah, so I didn't have much idea about it, sorry.

"have idea on"应改为"have an idea about"，表达更地道。

× No I can't. I feel like I don't have talent on cooking and umm when I was a child I want to study how to cook and make cakes because I like in uh, eat cake and enjoy it, umm, sweet food, but actually I can't cook it well.

✓ No, I can't. I feel like I don't have talent in cooking and umm when I was a child I wanted to study how to cook and make cakes because I like to eat cake and enjoy it, umm, sweet food, but actually I can't cook it well.

"want"应使用过去时"wanted"，"like in uh, eat cake"表达不正确，应为"like to eat cake"，"talent on"应改为"talent in"。

× I feel like I don't have talent on cooking and umm when I was a child I want to study how to cook and make cakes because I like in uh, eat cake and enjoy it, umm, sweet food, but actually I can't cook it well.

✓ I feel like I don't have talent in cooking and umm when I was a child I wanted to study how to cook and make cakes because I like to eat cake and enjoy it, umm, sweet food, but actually I can't cook it well.

"talent on"应改为"talent in"，表示在某方面有天赋。

× when I was a child I want to study how to cook and make cakes because I like in uh, eat cake and enjoy it, umm, sweet food, but actually I can't cook it well.

✓ when I was a child I wanted to study how to cook and make cakes because I like to eat cake and enjoy it, umm, sweet food, but actually I can't cook it well.

描述过去的愿望，动词应使用过去时"wanted"。

× Yes definitely, I enjoyed eating sweet foods such as cakes since I was a child and I feel very enjoyable and relaxed when I eat cakes.

✓ Yes definitely, I have enjoyed eating sweet foods such as cakes since I was a child and I feel very happy and relaxed when I eat cakes.

"enjoyable"是形容词，描述人时应使用"happy"或"enjoy"的副词形式，且时态应用现在完成时表示从过去持续到现在。

× But actually my mom don't allow me to eat more because she think it is high sugar, high oils and not.

✓ But actually my mom doesn't allow me to eat more because she thinks it is high in sugar and oil.

主语是第三人称单数，动词应加-s，"don't"改为"doesn't"，"think"改为"thinks"，"high sugar, high oils and not"表达不完整，应改为"high in sugar and oil"。

× But actually my mom don't allow me to eat more because she think it is high sugar, high oils and not.

✓ But actually my mom doesn't allow me to eat more because she thinks it is high in sugar and oil.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，"don't"应改为"doesn't"，"think"应改为"thinks"。

× Definitely enjoy some sweet food, can clean out such an oil filling after I have have finished my meal.

✓ I definitely enjoy some sweet food; it can clean out such an oily feeling after I have finished my meal.

缺少主语，且"oil filling"应为"oily feeling"，表达更准确。

× Definitely enjoy some sweet food, can clean out such an oil filling after I have have finished my meal.

✓ I definitely enjoy some sweet food; it can clean out such an oily feeling after I have finished my meal.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整，应补充主语使句子完整。

× But however I usually feel very full when I umm, finish my meals and I can't have enough space to eat it.

✓ However, I usually feel very full when I finish my meals and I don't have enough space to eat it.

"But however"重复，改为"However"即可，"can't have enough space"表达不自然，改为"don't have enough space"更合适。