Coins— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating phrases like "to give him". Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I do use coins, especially when I travel long distances. If the driver prefers coins over larger notes like 100, I usually give him coins to make the payment easier.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but could be improved by avoiding unnecessary phrases like "there is no shame" which is not very relevant here. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about why coins are convenient.

Example: Yes, I find coins very convenient because they allow me to pay the exact fare without any confusion. Moreover, using coins is easier than carrying large notes like 100 or 200.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like "umpteen coins" and "It is a skill of collecting coins." Try to use correct tense and clearer expressions. Also, add linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: Yes, I collected many coins when I was a kid because I was fond of collecting coins of 10, 20 paise, and sometimes 1 and 2 rupees. I enjoyed this hobby as it helped me learn about different coins.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has grammar errors and is a bit disorganized. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and correct verb tenses. Also, avoid repeating information unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, I always carry coins when I go out because I often travel by bus or auto rickshaw. Drivers usually ask for exact change, and they cannot give change for large notes like 100 or 2000, so I keep coins in my pocket for convenience.

× When I'm traveling too long distances and the driver wants money instead of larger cash than I preferably use coins to give him to give him instead of ₹100 note or any.

✓ When I'm traveling long distances and the driver wants money instead of larger cash, I preferably use coins to give him instead of a ₹100 note or any.

The phrase 'traveling too long distances' is incorrect; 'too' is unnecessary here. Also, the repetition 'to give him to give him' is redundant and should be removed. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× When I'm traveling too long distances and the driver wants money instead of larger cash than I preferably use coins to give him to give him instead of ₹100 note or any.

✓ When I'm traveling long distances and the driver wants money instead of larger cash, I preferably use coins to give him instead of a ₹100 note or any.

The use of 'larger cash than' is incorrect; it should be 'larger cash'. Also, 'preferably' is better placed before 'use' for correct adverb placement.

× Coins are much more convenient to pay exact fare without any confusion.

✓ Coins are much more convenient for paying the exact fare without any confusion.

The verb 'convenient' is usually followed by 'for' plus gerund form. So, 'convenient to pay' should be 'convenient for paying'.

× Yes, I have collected umpteen coins when I am a kid because I'm fond of collecting these coins of 10/20 or sometimes 1 and 2 coins.

✓ Yes, I collected umpteen coins when I was a kid because I'm fond of collecting these coins of 10, 20, or sometimes 1 and 2 coins.

The phrase 'have collected' with 'when I am a kid' is inconsistent. The past simple 'collected' and 'was' should be used for past time reference.

× Then the driver ask for exact coins.

✓ Then the driver asks for exact coins.

The verb 'ask' needs to be in third person singular form 'asks' to agree with the singular subject 'driver'.

× Then the driver ask for exact coins.

✓ Then the driver asks for exact coins.

In present tense, third person singular subjects require the verb to end with 's' or 'es'. 'Driver' is third person singular, so 'ask' should be 'asks'.

× Not able to change the note of 100 or 2000.

✓ He is not able to change the ₹100 or ₹2000 notes.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. Also, 'note of 100 or 2000' is better expressed as '₹100 or ₹2000 notes'.

× Then I preferably always keep coin with me in my pocket.

✓ Then I preferably always keep coins with me in my pocket.

'Coin' should be plural 'coins' because it refers to multiple coins. Also, 'preferably always' is awkward; 'always preferably' or 'preferably always' can be improved but is acceptable here.