Coins— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response direct, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid word confusion (coin vs course/car), correct tense and articles. Use one or two supporting details and linking word. For example, say you mainly use online banking and give a short reason or example.

Example: No, I don't. I mostly use online banking now, so I rarely carry coins. For instance, I pay for groceries and bills with mobile apps, which is faster and more convenient.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly, then give one specific reason. Avoid confusing or incorrect words (e.g., 'car', 'course'). Use correct grammar and linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: No, I don't find coins convenient because they are slow to use and easy to lose. For example, I prefer contactless card payments since they are quicker at shops.

Suggestion: Respond with a clear past-tense statement and specific details about what you collected. Use correct verb forms and vocabulary (e.g., 'collected coins' not 'collect the nationality card'). Add a brief current status with a linking word like 'and'.

Example: Yes, I collected coins when I was a child. I focused on foreign coins from different countries, and I still add to the collection occasionally by buying special coins online.

Suggestion: Give a clear conditional answer and use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'small items' and 'coin wallet'). Use proper tense and avoid contradictions. Provide one short example to clarify.

Example: It depends. If I'm buying something cheap, I carry a small coin purse; however, if I'm going to a shopping mall I usually leave coins at home and use my card or phone payment.

× No I don't. Right now I currently use almost the online banking so I don't take any course in my wallet.

✓ No, I don't. Right now I mainly use online banking, so I don't carry any coins in my wallet.

Errors: incorrect use of adverbs ('almost the online banking'), wrong verb choice ('take any course'), and article/word order issues. Correction: use 'mainly' to express frequency, remove unnecessary 'the', use 'use online banking', and replace 'take any course in my wallet' with 'carry any coins in my wallet'. Suggestion: Practice common collocations (use online banking, carry coins) and keep adverb placement before the main verb or after auxiliary verbs.

× No, I don't think used the car is more convenient because when you buy a thing that have a value you need to pay it by a bank. If you pay it by a course you have to take it to.

✓ No, I don't think using cash is more convenient, because when you buy something valuable you need to pay by card. If you pay with coins you have to carry them.

Errors: incorrect verb forms ('used the car'), wrong word choice ('car' and 'course' instead of 'card' and 'coins'), subject-verb agreement ('thing that have'), and awkward prepositions. Correction: 'using cash' or 'using coins' is the gerund phrase; 'something' is the correct noun; 'pay by card' and 'pay with coins' are correct prepositions; 'carry them' fixes object. Suggestion: Learn correct vocabulary (cash, card, coins) and use gerunds for activities (using cash); check subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I was. I have been collect the nationality card from the other country and right now I'm still doing this.

✓ Yes, I did. I collected nationality cards from other countries, and I'm still doing this now.

Errors: incorrect auxiliary and tense mix ('I was' instead of 'I did'), incorrect verb form ('have been collect' should be 'have been collecting' or 'collected'), and article/preposition choices. Correction uses simple past 'collected' and present continuous 'I'm still doing this'. Suggestion: Use 'did' for short answers to past actions, use correct perfect or continuous forms ('have been collecting') when indicating an ongoing activity that started in the past.

× It depends. If I want to buy something in a small value, I take a car Wallace with me, but if I go to the shopping mall I didn't take it.

✓ It depends. If I want to buy something of low value, I take a small coin purse with me, but if I go to the shopping mall I don't take it.

Errors: incorrect expressions ('in a small value'), wrong nouns ('car Wallace' is incorrect), inconsistent tense ('I didn't take it' should be 'I don't take it'). Correction: 'of low value' or 'small value' for price, 'coin purse' for container, and present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use consistent present tense for habitual behavior, learn correct noun phrases (coin purse), and use 'don't' for negative present simple.