Fishing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more fluent and structured by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and 'and'. Also, provide a clear opinion with supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Fishing is not very popular in my country; however, I have noticed that many people enjoy fishing, even in urban areas, which shows some interest in this activity.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correcting minor grammar mistakes. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

Example: Yes, I love eating fish because it is not only tasty but also healthy since it contains many vitamins. Moreover, it can be prepared in various ways, and I have several recipes that I enjoy cooking.

Suggestion: Avoid excessive hesitation and incomplete sentences. Structure your answer clearly by introducing the place, its location, and what you can do there, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: Yes, in Georgia, there is a fish market located by the Black Sea in the city of Batumi. You can buy fresh fish there, and there are also restaurants where you can have your fish cooked.

Suggestion: Your answer is contradictory and unclear. Provide a clear opinion and support it with specific details, avoiding repetition and using linking words for coherence.

Example: I don't think fishing is very popular in my country because only a small number of people engage in it, mostly as a hobby rather than a common activity.

× I can't say it is really popular umm but I see lots of people umm are fishing, umm even and umm city.

✓ I can't say it is really popular, umm, but I see lots of people, umm, are fishing, umm, even in the city.

The preposition 'and' is incorrectly used instead of 'in' before 'city'. The correct preposition to indicate location is 'in'. Also, commas help clarify the sentence.

× And I have lots of recipe to cook fish.

✓ And I have lots of recipes to cook fish.

The noun 'recipe' should be plural 'recipes' to agree with 'lots of', which indicates more than one.

× we in, in Georgia, we have a city bathroom which is umm, umm, on Black Sea and umm, there is a fish market where you can buy fish and it's at the same time, umm, there, there are restaurants where you can go with your fish or.

✓ We in Georgia have a city bathhouse which is, umm, on the Black Sea, and there is a fish market where you can buy fish. At the same time, there are restaurants where you can go with your fish.

The phrase 'city bathroom' is incorrect; the correct term is 'city bathhouse'. Also, 'on Black Sea' needs the definite article 'the' before 'Black Sea'. The sentence was also fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity.