Fishing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết các ý một cách mạch lạc.

Example: I don't like fish very much, but I prefer ocean fish such as tuna and salmon. I especially enjoy eating sashimi because it tastes fresh and delicious. Although salmon is a bit fatty, I find it hard to stop eating once I start.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Example: No, I haven't been to the fish market yet, but I plan to go soon. I usually cook at home, but I find it difficult to judge the freshness of fish and to choose the right type, so visiting the market will help me learn more.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn về thói quen câu cá trong nước bạn.

Example: Yes, fishing is quite popular in my country. In my village, both children and middle-aged men often go fishing together. While fishing, they usually chat about the types of fish they catch and share their experiences.

× I prefer eating ocean fishes like tuna or salmon.

✓ I prefer eating ocean fish like tuna or salmon.

The word 'fish' is both singular and plural. Using 'fishes' is incorrect here because it refers to multiple species, but in this context, 'fish' as plural is appropriate.

× I love eating sashimi so on the other salmon it's a little bit fatty but when you eat a piece of summer you can't stop.

✓ I love eating sashimi. On the other hand, salmon is a little bit fatty, but when you eat a piece of salmon, you can't stop.

The original sentence is run-on and unclear. It needs to be split into clearer sentences and corrected for word choice ('summer' should be 'salmon').

× I just do cooking because I find it hard for me to realize the fresh of the fish and I can't separate the fish so it's difficult for me.

✓ I just cook because I find it hard to recognize the freshness of the fish and I can't distinguish the fish, so it's difficult for me.

The phrase 'do cooking' is incorrect; 'cook' is better. 'Realize the fresh of the fish' is incorrect; 'recognize the freshness of the fish' is correct. 'Separate the fish' is unclear; 'distinguish the fish' fits better.

× In my village, both children and middle-aged men usually go to fishing together and while fishing they chatting about the fish and their decisions.

✓ In my village, both children and middle-aged men usually go fishing together, and while fishing, they chat about the fish and their decisions.

The phrase 'go to fishing' is incorrect; it should be 'go fishing'. 'They chatting' should be 'they chat' to match subject-verb agreement and tense.

× while fishing they chatting about the fish and their decisions.

✓ while fishing, they chat about the fish and their decisions.

The verb 'chatting' does not agree with the subject 'they' in this context; it should be the simple present 'chat'.