Fishing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は自然ですが、"However"の繰り返しを避け、より流暢で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。また、具体的な理由や感想を加えると良いです。

Example: Yes, I like eating fish, especially Japanese raw fish dishes like sushi. Since I am currently in France, I haven't had authentic sushi here, but I look forward to trying sushi restaurants in Europe because I enjoy fresh seafood.

Suggestion: "I haven't in my life"は不自然なので、"I have never been"などにしましょう。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使い、文をつなげるとより自然です。

Example: No, I have never been to a fish market. Since my town is a bit far from the fish market, it is uncommon to buy fish there, so I usually buy fish at the supermarket.

Suggestion: 最後の文は意味が不明瞭なので、明確に自分の意見を述べましょう。また、接続詞を使って理由や感想を論理的に繋げると良いです。

Example: Yes, fishing is very popular in Japan because it is an island country surrounded by the sea, making fishing easily accessible. However, I personally find fishing boring, so I don't enjoy it much.

× Yes, I like eating fish, especially I like Japanese raw fish food like sushi.

✓ Yes, I like eating fish, especially Japanese raw fish food like sushi.

The conjunction 'especially' should be followed directly by the item being emphasized without repeating the subject and verb. The phrase 'especially I like' is incorrect; it should be 'especially Japanese raw fish food like sushi.'

× However, I want to try sushi restaurant in Europe.

✓ However, I want to try a sushi restaurant in Europe.

The phrase 'try sushi restaurant' is missing an article before 'sushi restaurant.' Also, 'try' is used with a noun meaning to visit or eat at a restaurant, so the article 'a' is necessary here.

× No, I haven't in my life.

✓ No, I haven't been in my life.

The verb 'have' requires a past participle to complete the present perfect tense. The sentence is missing the verb 'been' after 'haven't.'

× It is uncommon to buy fish in the fish market because our town is little bit far from the fish market.

✓ It is uncommon to buy fish at the fish market because our town is a little bit far from the fish market.

The preposition 'at' is more appropriate than 'in' when referring to markets. Also, 'little bit' should be preceded by the article 'a' to form 'a little bit.'

× So I often buy fish in the supermarket.

✓ So I often buy fish at the supermarket.

The preposition 'at' is more appropriate than 'in' when referring to places like supermarkets.

× However, I found it boring to that I go fishing.

✓ However, I found it boring to go fishing.

The phrase 'to that I go fishing' is incorrect. The correct infinitive form is 'to go fishing.' The word 'that' is unnecessary and incorrect here.