Fishing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các cụm từ không cần thiết như "you know" và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "I always want to fish" thành "I always want to eat fish". Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

Example: Yes, I really love eating fish because I am a big fan of seafood. Sushi, in particular, is one of my favorite dishes.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ và cụm từ như "you know" và "fish shell" không rõ nghĩa. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp như "I don't really like go to the market" nên sửa thành "I don't really like going to the market". Hãy sử dụng câu trả lời mạch lạc, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn.

Example: Unfortunately, I have never been to the fish market because I don't like the strong smell there. However, I sometimes buy seafood from the supermarket, which is much cleaner and more convenient.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp như "make it a habit to fishing" nên sửa thành "make it a habit to fish" và "those who is older" nên là "those who are older". Bạn cũng nên tránh sử dụng quá nhiều từ thừa như "you know" và làm câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, fishing is quite popular in my country. Many Vietnamese people, especially older adults, enjoy fishing as a relaxing activity.

× Actually, you know, I am a seafood lover so I always want to fish, especially sushi.

✓ Actually, you know, I am a seafood lover so I always want to eat fish, especially sushi.

The verb 'want' should be followed by the base form of the verb or 'to' + base verb, not the gerund form. 'Want to eat' is correct, while 'want to fish' changes the meaning and 'want to fish' is not appropriate here since the student means to eat fish, not to fish.

× The the reason for this is that I don't really like go to the market because the smell, but I sometimes go to the, you know, fish, you know, fish shell in this supermarket.

✓ The reason for this is that I don't really like going to the market because of the smell, but I sometimes go to the fish section in this supermarket.

The phrase 'like go to' is incorrect; it should be 'like going to' because 'like' is followed by a gerund when expressing preference. Also, 'because the smell' is incomplete; it should be 'because of the smell' to correctly use the preposition. 'Fish shell' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'fish section' is the correct term.

× You know, Vietnamese people make it a habit to fishing, especially in older, in, especially those who is older because they find it a, you know, a activity to relax.

✓ You know, Vietnamese people make it a habit to fish, especially older people, especially those who are older because they find it an activity to relax.

The phrase 'make it a habit to fishing' is incorrect; after 'to' we use the base form 'fish'. Also, 'in older' is incorrect; it should be 'older people'. 'Those who is older' has a subject-verb agreement error; 'who are older' is correct. 'A activity' should be 'an activity' because 'activity' starts with a vowel sound.