Road— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ viết tắt như "Rd." và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: No, the roads in my area are not busy because I live in the countryside where the population is low compared to the city. Therefore, the traffic is usually light and the roads are quite free.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chọn từ chính xác, ví dụ "curse the road" là sai, có thể bạn muốn nói "cross the road". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và hoàn chỉnh ý tưởng. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh nói lắp.

Example: Yes, many people cross the road when the traffic light turns red. In my hometown, people are quite interested in crossing the road carefully even when the light is red.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ "two lines of roads" thay vì "two line of rows". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Example: The roads in my city are quite narrow, usually with only two lanes. This is because the population is small, so the government builds roads suitable for the number of people.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ viết tắt không chính xác như "Rd." và "undergrad" (có thể bạn muốn nói "under construction"). Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nên đưa ra lý do cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời thuyết phục.

Example: Yes, I believe the roads in my city need improvement. For example, the road near my house is currently under construction and it needs to be fixed soon to improve traffic conditions.

× Absolutely not because I live in the countryside, we just have a low population umm compared to the city.

✓ Absolutely not, because I live in the countryside, we just have a low population compared to the city.

The sentence is a run-on sentence and needs a comma after 'Absolutely not' to separate the clauses properly.

× So that's why Rd. in my hometown is really free.

✓ So that's why the roads in my hometown are really free.

'Rd.' is an abbreviation for 'road' which is singular, but the context implies multiple roads, so it should be plural 'roads' and the verb should agree accordingly.

× I have seen many people curse the road when the light red is turning on, and I think that in my hometown people are really interesting in working across the road, even is in the.

✓ I have seen many people cross the road when the red light is on, and I think that in my hometown people are really interested in walking across the road, even when it is red.

'Curse' is incorrect; it should be 'cross'. 'Light red is turning on' should be 'red light is on'. 'Interesting in working' should be 'interested in walking'. The sentence was incomplete and unclear, so it was corrected for clarity and grammar.

× It is quite small and it's had only two line of rows in my country because, umm, mostly because we don't have a lot of people to use that.

✓ It is quite small and it has only two lanes of roads in my country because, umm, mostly because we don't have a lot of people to use them.

'Two line of rows' is incorrect; it should be 'two lanes of roads'. Also, 'it's had' is incorrect; it should be 'it has'. 'Use that' should be 'use them' to agree with plural 'lanes'.

× So the government are making them suitable for the number of population.

✓ So the government is making them suitable for the number of population.

'Government' is a singular noun and should be followed by 'is' not 'are'.

× Umm there are several Rd. are undergrad in my country.

✓ Umm there are several roads under construction in my country.

'Rd.' should be plural 'roads'. 'Are undergrad' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'under construction'.

× As an example for it is my house Rd. with Carl Chen Kelvin and I think it's need to be improved right now.

✓ As an example, my house road, Carl Chen Kelvin Road, needs to be improved right now.

'Rd.' should be 'road'. 'It's need' is incorrect; it should be 'it needs'. The sentence was restructured for clarity.