Road— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "The roads in my area are not busy because it is a quiet neighborhood. However, the main roads connecting to the city center are quite busy, especially during peak hours."

Example: The roads in my area are not busy because it is a quiet neighborhood. However, the main roads connecting to the city center are quite busy, especially during peak hours.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding filler words like "umm" and by structuring your sentences better. Use linking words like "although" and "because" correctly to make your answer more coherent. For example: "Yes, people do cross the roads in my city. Although the government has built a pedestrian bridge to reduce accidents, many people avoid using it because of the high crime rate in that area."

Example: Yes, people do cross the roads in my city. Although the government has built a pedestrian bridge to reduce accidents, many people avoid using it because of the high crime rate in that area.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to use precise vocabulary and avoid repetition. Also, organize your ideas logically with linking words. For example: "The main roads in my city are usually very busy and well-maintained. However, the smaller streets are in poor condition, especially during the rainy season, which causes many vehicles to break down and leads to accidents."

Example: The main roads in my city are usually very busy and well-maintained. However, the smaller streets are in poor condition, especially during the rainy season, which causes many vehicles to break down and leads to accidents.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using more varied vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your points. For example: "Yes, the roads in my city definitely need improvement. The main roads lack proper drainage, so they flood during the rainy season, causing car breakdowns and accidents. Moreover, the smaller streets are in very poor condition and often become impassable."

Example: Yes, the roads in my city definitely need improvement. The main roads lack proper drainage, so they flood during the rainy season, causing car breakdowns and accidents. Moreover, the smaller streets are in very poor condition and often become impassable.

× The roads in my area where I live is not busy but the roads connecting St. to street is quite busy.

✓ The roads in my area where I live are not busy but the roads connecting St. to street are quite busy.

The subject 'roads' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× The reason why the road that I live is not really busy because the road is not dead and during rainy season it is so terrible to pass.

✓ The reason why the road where I live is not really busy is because the road is not dead-end and during the rainy season it is very difficult to pass.

The original sentence lacks a main verb in the first clause and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'is' after 'busy' corrects the sentence structure. Also, 'dead' should be 'dead-end' to describe the road type, and 'terrible to pass' is better expressed as 'very difficult to pass' for clarity.

× the roads connecting streets have tagged and they are usually very busy, but the roads on the streets are not sad and they are very very impassible especially during rainy season and most times vehicles breakdown and there are a lot of accidents.

✓ The roads connecting streets have potholes and they are usually very busy, but the roads on the streets are not bad and they are very impassable especially during the rainy season and most times vehicles break down and there are a lot of accidents.

The word 'tagged' is incorrect here; likely meant 'potholes'. 'Sad' should be 'bad' to describe condition. 'Impassible' is misspelled; correct is 'impassable'. 'Vehicles breakdown' should be 'vehicles break down' as 'breakdown' is a noun, not a verb. These corrections address singular/plural and word choice issues.

× Yes, people cross the road where I live, although the government has built a bridge there to save lives and reduce the number of accidents that happen in my city, but a lot of people are reluctant to climb the to use the bridge because of umm, the crime rate there.

✓ Yes, people cross the road where I live, although the government has built a bridge there to save lives and reduce the number of accidents that happen in my city, but a lot of people are reluctant to use the bridge because of the crime rate there.

The phrase 'reluctant to climb the to use the bridge' is incorrect. 'Climb the to' is unnecessary and incorrect preposition usage. The correct phrase is 'reluctant to use the bridge'.

× the roads connecting the streets do not have proper drainage and during rainy season everywhere is always flooded and this leads to car breakdown and accidents.

✓ The roads connecting the streets do not have proper drainage and during the rainy season everywhere is always flooded and this leads to car breakdowns and accidents.

'During rainy season' should be 'during the rainy season' to use the correct article with the prepositional phrase. Also, 'car breakdown' should be plural 'car breakdowns' to match the context of multiple incidents.