Road— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, clarity and sentence structure. Begin with a clear topic sentence that answers the question directly. Use one or two supporting sentences with linking words (e.g., "usually", "especially", "because") and correct verb forms. Keep it concise (max 4-5 sentences).

Example: Usually the roads near my home are quite busy, especially during peak hours. This is because they lead directly to the city centre and also connect to the suburbs, so many commuters use them every day.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent and eliminate fillers (e.g., "umm"). Start with a clear statement, then give a concise reason using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Use correct verb forms and plural agreement.

Example: Yes, people do cross the roads, but they are generally careful now because there have been many accidents recently. Therefore, most pedestrians wait for the traffic lights and follow the rules to stay safe.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct tense and word choice. Use one or two supporting details about maintenance or age, with linking words (e.g., "because", "so") but avoid repeating the question. Keep sentences grammatically correct.

Example: The roads are generally in good condition because they were built about twenty years ago and the local council maintains them regularly. As a result, there are few potholes and the surfaces are smooth.

Suggestion: Be specific about what needs improvement and why. Start with a clear opinion, then give concrete details (e.g., poor sidewalks, lighting) and use linking words (e.g., "because", "also"). Fix vocabulary and sentence structure.

Example: Yes, I think some improvements are needed, especially to the sidewalks because many pavements are narrow or damaged. For example, better sidewalks and more street lighting would make walking safer, since pedestrians now sometimes have to walk on the road.

× Is depend on the term.

✓ It depends on the term.

Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure: the sentence lacks a proper subject and the verb form is incorrect. 'Is depend' is wrong because 'depend' must be used with a subject and auxiliary; the correct phrasing is 'It depends'. Suggestion: always include the subject and use the correct verb form (third-person singular 'depends').

× If in the hours there's are always busy because the road is the way to the middle of the city and the road in another way is also go to the suburb.

✓ During rush hours they are always busy because this road leads to the city center, and the other road also goes to the suburbs.

Multiple tense and word-choice issues: 'If in the hours' is awkward and should be 'During rush hours'. 'There's are always busy' mixes 'there is' and plural; use 'they are always busy' referring to roads. 'The road is the way to the middle of the city' is unnatural; use 'this road leads to the city center'. 'Another way is also go' has incorrect verb form; use 'the other road also goes'. Suggestion: identify the subject ('they' or 'the roads') and use consistent present simple for habitual situations, and choose idiomatic verbs like 'lead' and correct plural forms ('suburbs').

× Yes, right now everyone umm know that we have to wait for the right traffic to ready for causing the the road because lately there's a lot of accidents.

✓ Yes, right now everyone knows that we have to wait for the traffic to be clear because there have been many accidents recently.

Pronoun and verb agreement and phrasing: 'everyone know' should be 'everyone knows' (third-person singular). 'Wait for the right traffic to ready for causing the the road' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is waiting for traffic to be clear, so use 'wait for the traffic to be clear'. 'Lately there's a lot of accidents' mixes singular 'there's' with plural 'a lot of accidents' and tense; use present perfect 'there have been many accidents recently'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with 'everyone' and use standard expressions ('traffic to be clear', 'there have been').

× So right now everyone have to follow the rule.

✓ So right now everyone has to follow the rules.

Subject-verb agreement and article/number: 'everyone' is singular and requires 'has', not 'have'. Also 'the rule' is too specific; 'rules' (plural) or 'the rule' depending on context—'rules' fits general meaning. Suggestion: remember 'everyone' takes singular verbs and choose singular/plural noun forms to match meaning.

× It's quite good because the road is just construct 20 years ago and they always maintain it, so is it in a good condition?

✓ It's quite good because the road was just constructed 20 years ago and they always maintain it, so it is in good condition.

Article and verb form issues: 'the road is just construct 20 years ago' mixes present tense with a past time reference; use past passive 'was constructed'. 'Just' with past time can be okay but passive past is required. 'so is it in a good condition?' is incorrectly ordered for a statement; should be 'so it is in good condition'. Suggestion: use past tense passive for constructions built in the past ('was constructed') and place 'it is' in normal subject-verb order for statements. Also use 'in good condition' (no article needed).

× Yes, it's not that the Rose, but it the path through along the roads is have to improve too, because if the pathos it is not good for work.

✓ Yes, it's not the roads themselves, but the paths alongside the roads that need improvement too, because if the sidewalks are not good it is difficult to use them.

Multiple structural and vocabulary errors: 'the Rose' is likely 'roads' or 'the roads'—clarified to 'the roads themselves'. 'the path through along the roads is have to improve' has incorrect word order and verb form; use 'the paths alongside the roads that need improvement'. 'pathos' is incorrect; likely 'path' or 'sidewalks'. 'not good for work' is unclear; interpret as 'difficult to use' or 'unsafe for walking'. Suggestion: identify intended nouns ('paths'/'sidewalks'), use correct relative clause 'that need improvement', and match plural nouns with plural verbs.

× Sometimes the people have to walk beside the roast.

✓ Sometimes people have to walk beside the road.

Preposition and typo: 'beside' is acceptable but 'the roast' is a typo for 'road'. 'Sometimes the people' is unnatural; use 'Sometimes people'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles with general plural nouns and correct spelling ('road').