Perfume— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sửa lỗi phát âm và dùng từ đúng (ví dụ: 'perfume' thay vì 'perform', 'fresh scent' thay vì 'fresh sand'). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I really like perfume and use it almost every day. It has become a part of my daily routine because fresh scents make me feel more comfortable, confident, and refreshed throughout the day.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi như 'our first send' thành 'a fresh scent'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú.

Example: Yes, I use perfume almost every day in my daily life. I usually choose a fresh scent because it helps me feel more confident and relaxed when I go out. It also completes my overall appearance.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ 'make perfume a gift' thành 'giving perfume as a gift'. Bạn nên dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp lý do cụ thể hơn cho quan điểm của mình.

Example: Actually, I don't usually buy perfume as a gift because I find it difficult to choose the right scent. I am not sure what kind of perfume people prefer, so I prefer to give gifts like makeup items or clothes instead.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sửa lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ 'the arch nail all loose with tongue' không rõ nghĩa, nên thay bằng tên thương hiệu nổi tiếng. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Example: Yes, I think perfumes can be expensive. For example, famous brands like Chanel or Dior cost a lot, but their scents are very good and last a long time, so they are worth the price.

× Yes, I am a big fan of Perform.

✓ Yes, I am a big fan of perfume.

The word 'Perform' is a misspelling of 'perfume', which is a singular noun. Correct spelling is necessary for clarity.

× I use it almost everyday.

✓ I use it almost every day.

The phrase 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace'. The correct adverbial phrase here is 'every day', meaning 'each day'.

× Is like a part of my routine and I love using fresh sand because it's making me feel more comfortable, confident and refresh throughout the day.

✓ It is like a part of my routine, and I love using fresh scents because they make me feel more comfortable, confident, and refreshed throughout the day.

The sentence lacks a subject at the beginning ('Is' should be 'It is'). 'Fresh sand' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'fresh scent'. Also, 'refresh' should be 'refreshed' to match the adjective form. The verb 'it's making' is better as 'they make' to agree with plural 'scents'.

× Yes, I almost use is every day in my day daily life.

✓ Yes, I almost use it every day in my daily life.

The pronoun 'is' is incorrect here; it should be 'it' to refer to 'perfume'. Also, 'day daily life' is redundant; 'daily life' suffices.

× And I usually use our first send because it's making me feel more confident and relaxed when I go out.

✓ And I usually use our first scent because it makes me feel more confident and relaxed when I go out.

'Send' should be 'scent'. Also, 'it's making me feel' is better as 'it makes me feel' for habitual action.

× An is can make my old a perfect.

✓ And it can make my outfit perfect.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Likely intended meaning is that the perfume can make the outfit perfect.

× Actually not because I think make perform a gift is very difficult because I don't know.

✓ Actually not, because I think giving perfume as a gift is very difficult since I don't know.

The sentence lacks modal verb and proper structure. 'Make perform a gift' is incorrect; 'giving perfume as a gift' is correct.

× I don't know exactly that what people favorite perform sent so I re ferd make a gift like a makeup items are closed shoes.

✓ I don't know exactly what people's favorite perfume scent is, so I prefer to make a gift like makeup items or closed shoes.

Several errors: 'favorite perform sent' should be 'favorite perfume scent'; 're ferd' should be 'prefer'; 'are closed shoes' should be 'or closed shoes'.

× Yes, I believe so. Some famous perform like the arch nail all loose with tongue is.

✓ Yes, I believe so. Some famous perfumes like Chanel, Dior, and Gucci are very expensive.

'Perform' should be 'perfumes' (plural). The brand names are misspelled and unclear; corrected to common perfume brands.

× They are very expensive, but the perform. Send of this of there is so good and you can use this for long time.

✓ They are very expensive, but the perfume scents are very good and you can use them for a long time.

The sentence is fragmented and contains misspellings. 'Perform. Send of this of there' is corrected to 'perfume scents'. 'Use this' changed to 'use them' to agree with plural 'scents'.