Perfume— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding repetition and unclear phrases. Also, use correct grammar and provide a concise reason for your preference.

Example: Yes, I definitely like perfumes. There are many perfumes made by different countries, but my favourite is Acqua di Gio because it has a very pleasant and refreshing scent.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent by structuring it clearly and avoiding confusing phrases. Use linking words to explain your habits and reasons.

Example: No, I don't usually use perfume in daily life. However, I do wear it when I attend important meetings because it helps me feel confident.

Suggestion: Avoid unclear and repetitive phrases. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and use correct grammar.

Example: Yes, I would definitely buy perfume as a gift for my family and friends because it is a thoughtful and popular present.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer by using proper grammar and explaining your opinion with specific details. Avoid vague phrases.

Example: Yes, branded perfumes can be quite expensive. However, it depends on individual preferences and budgets, as some people prefer cheaper options.

× Yes, definitely I like perfumes.

✓ Yes, I definitely like perfumes.

The adverb 'definitely' should be placed before the main verb 'like' to correctly modify it. Placing it after the subject 'I' is incorrect in English sentence structure.

× There are many perfumes made by the different nations but but I mostly like the A call either which is my favorite perfume and it smell is so nice.

✓ There are many perfumes made by different nations, but I mostly like Acqua di Gio, which is my favorite perfume and its smell is so nice.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'different nations' and 'A call either'. Also, 'A call either' seems to be a mishearing or misspelling of a perfume name; corrected to 'Acqua di Gio' as a common perfume. 'It smell is so nice' is incorrect; should be 'its smell is so nice' to show possession.

× No, I don't like to use perfumes in our daily life because sometimes when I mean when I attend some important meetings, I definitely use the perfume.

✓ No, I don't like to use perfumes in my daily life, but sometimes when I attend important meetings, I definitely use perfume.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrect here because the speaker is talking about their own daily life, so 'my' is appropriate. Also, the phrase 'when I mean when I attend' is redundant and incorrect; it should be simplified to 'but sometimes when I attend'. 'The perfume' is incorrect; 'perfume' without article is better here.

× Yes I definitely will a by the perfume as a gift for my family and electives and my and my friends. Which is more spot if I definitely buy a gift as a perfume.

✓ Yes, I definitely will buy perfume as a gift for my family, relatives, and my friends. If possible, I definitely buy perfume as a gift.

The modal verb 'will' should be followed directly by the base verb 'buy' without 'a'. 'Electives' is incorrect; likely meant 'relatives'. The sentence 'Which is more spot if I definitely buy a gift as a perfume' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; rephrased to 'If possible, I definitely buy perfume as a gift.'

× Yes, the branded perfumes are little bit expensive, but is according to individual data which persons need expensive or cheaper.

✓ Yes, branded perfumes are a little bit expensive, but it depends on individual preferences whether a person needs expensive or cheaper ones.

The phrase 'little bit expensive' needs the article 'a' before 'little bit'. 'Is according to individual data which persons need expensive or cheaper' is incorrect; it should be 'it depends on individual preferences whether a person needs expensive or cheaper ones' to convey the intended meaning clearly.