Perfume— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you like perfume?
Candidate
I really like perfume. I think it's a great way to personalize your outfit. Besides, it's also a sign of your personality.
Examiner
Do you use perfume in your daily life?
Candidate
I use perfume in my daily life because I think it's a part of my personality. Besides, I have a perfume for each occasion. For example, at school I use the Ninarichi perfume.
Examiner
Will you buy perfume as a gift?
Candidate
I will never buy perfume as a gift because I think it's really personal choice even if someone wants perfume. The only exception is if the person knows a specific brand so I will buy it for her.
Examiner
Do you think perfumes are expensive?
Candidate
I think perfumes are really expensive, mostly because the brands are luxury product. So I think I pay more for the brand that the composition of the perfumes.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you like perfume?
Score: 85.0Suggestion: Votre réponse est bonne mais vous pouvez améliorer la fluidité en utilisant des mots de liaison plus variés et en évitant la répétition de "I think". Essayez d'ajouter un exemple spécifique pour rendre votre réponse plus vivante.
Example: Yes, I really enjoy wearing perfume because it adds a unique touch to my outfit and reflects my personality. For instance, I often choose floral scents for casual days and muskier ones for formal events.
Do you use perfume in your daily life?
Score: 88.0Suggestion: Votre réponse est claire mais vous pouvez améliorer la cohérence en utilisant des connecteurs plus variés et en précisant davantage les occasions. Cela rendra votre discours plus naturel et intéressant.
Example: Yes, I wear perfume every day as it expresses who I am. Moreover, I select different scents depending on the occasion; for example, I prefer a light, fresh fragrance like Ninarichi when I go to school.
Will you buy perfume as a gift?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: Votre réponse est pertinente mais un peu longue et répétitive. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale suivie d'une explication claire, en évitant les répétitions.
Example: I usually avoid buying perfume as a gift because scent preferences are very personal. However, if I know the recipient's favorite brand, I would consider purchasing it for them.
Do you think perfumes are expensive?
Score: 82.0Suggestion: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais contient quelques erreurs grammaticales. Améliorez la précision en reformulant et en utilisant des phrases plus naturelles.
Example: Yes, I believe perfumes are quite expensive, mainly because they are luxury items. Often, the price reflects the brand's reputation more than the actual ingredients used.
Grammar
× I think perfumes are really expensive, mostly because the brands are luxury product.
✓ I think perfumes are really expensive, mostly because the brands are luxury products.
The noun 'product' should be plural 'products' to agree with the plural subject 'brands'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.
× So I think I pay more for the brand that the composition of the perfumes.
✓ So I think I pay more for the brand than the composition of the perfumes.
The phrase 'that the composition' is incorrect; it should be 'than the composition' to make a proper comparison. This is an incorrect use of the definite article and comparative structure.
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