Perfume— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Instead of saying 'I spend a lot of money on it to buying perfumes', say 'I spend a lot of money buying perfumes'. Also, try to keep your answer concise and natural.

Example: Yes, I really like perfumes and often spend a lot of money buying them.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but needs grammatical correction and better linking. Instead of 'it feels me very confident and peaceful', say 'it makes me feel confident and peaceful'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I use perfume daily. In the morning, I spray it on my body because it makes me feel confident and peaceful throughout the day.

Suggestion: Your answer has several grammatical errors and is a bit confusing. Try to structure your answer clearly with correct grammar. For example, say 'My sister's wedding is coming soon, so I will buy her two sets of perfume as a gift to make her feel special.'

Example: Yes, I will buy perfume as a gift because my sister's wedding is coming soon. I plan to give her two sets of perfume to make her feel special on her big day.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using better vocabulary and clearer structure. Instead of 'long stay', say 'long-lasting'. Also, avoid repeating 'perfumes' unnecessarily and use linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, some perfumes are affordable, but many, especially foreign brands, are quite expensive. I prefer expensive perfumes because they are long-lasting and provide a pleasant fragrance throughout the day.

× I really like perfumes and I spend a lot of money on it to buying perfumes.

✓ I really like perfumes and I spend a lot of money on them to buy perfumes.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it refers to a singular noun, but 'perfumes' is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them'. Also, 'to buying' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to buy' because after 'to' we use the base form of the verb.

× I spray it on my body and it feels me very confident and peaceful.

✓ I spray it on my body and it makes me feel very confident and peaceful.

The phrase 'it feels me' is incorrect. The verb 'feel' in this context should be used as 'makes me feel' to express causing a feeling. Also, 'feel' is not used with a direct object like 'me' without 'make'.

× my sisters marries is coming near

✓ my sister's marriage is coming soon

The phrase 'sisters marries' is incorrect. The correct possessive form is 'sister's' and the noun should be 'marriage' (not 'marries'). Also, 'is coming near' is better expressed as 'is coming soon' for naturalness.

× I gave I will give her two sets of perfume on her wedding to make them feel good.

✓ I will give her two sets of perfume on her wedding to make her feel good.

The phrase 'I gave I will give' is incorrect and redundant. The correct future tense is 'I will give'. Also, 'them' should be 'her' because the gift is for one person.