Perfume— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như "really really". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn.

Example: Yes, I really like perfume because it helps me smell pleasant when I go out.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh mâu thuẫn trong câu trả lời và sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời nên có liên kết logic giữa các ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "it's make me". Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I don't use perfume every day. Instead, I wear it on special occasions like parties because I prefer natural scents. However, wearing perfume sometimes makes me feel more confident.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "two thing Perform". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về lý do chọn nước hoa làm quà tặng.

Example: Yes, I would buy perfume as a gift because it is a thoughtful present that shows my appreciation.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và hoàn thành câu đầy đủ. Sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

Example: I think the price of perfumes depends on the brand. Luxury brands like LV or Chanel are quite expensive, but local Vietnamese brands are more affordable.

× Of course I really really like perfume is can make me smell good when I go out.

✓ Of course I really really like perfume because it can make me smell good when I go out.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'is' before 'can', which is grammatically incorrect. The correct conjunction here is 'because' to link the two clauses logically. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Your daily life? Not really. I only wear perfume on special occasions such as important parties or events on a daily basis.

✓ Daily life? Not really. I only wear perfume on special occasions such as important parties or events.

The phrase 'Your daily life?' is inappropriate as a response to the question 'Do you use perfume in your daily life?'. It should be omitted or rephrased. Also, 'on a daily basis' contradicts 'only on special occasions', so it should be removed to avoid confusion.

× However, I do enjoy wearing perfume sometimes because it's make me feel more confident.

✓ However, I do enjoy wearing perfume sometimes because it makes me feel more confident.

The contraction 'it's' should be followed by the third person singular verb 'makes' instead of 'make'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving pronouns and verbs.

× Yes, two thing Perform is a good choice for a gift because it can express my gratitude.

✓ Yes, two things. Perfume is a good choice for a gift because it can express my gratitude.

The phrase 'two thing' should be 'two things' to match plural form. Also, 'Perform' is a misspelling of 'Perfume'. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× I think it's depend on items.

✓ I think it depends on the items.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, adding 'the' before 'items' specifies the noun properly.

× If you if perform from luxury items like LV or Chanels, it's quite expensive, but perform from a local brand in Vietnam is I think it's.

✓ If you buy perfume from luxury brands like LV or Chanel, it's quite expensive, but perfume from a local brand in Vietnam, I think, is cheaper.

The word 'perform' is a misspelling of 'perfume'. 'Chanels' should be 'Chanel' as it is a brand name. The sentence structure is awkward and incomplete; rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.