Perfume— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is informative but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid filler phrases like 'I think'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I enjoy perfume and have been collecting them for two years. My collection includes around 40 bottles with various scents, such as floral, almond, and even gourmand aromas.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains a small error ('furry scent' likely meant 'fruity scent'). Also, try to complete your sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I wear different perfumes depending on the occasion. For instance, I choose woody scents for work to appear professional and calm, whereas I prefer fruity scents when going out with friends to feel more lively.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words for better flow.

Example: Not really, because perfume preferences are very personal. Therefore, to avoid giving an unwanted gift, I usually choose other presents instead.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, use linking words to organise your answer logically.

Example: It depends on how often you use perfume. If you wear it daily for work or social occasions, buying a perfume is a reasonable expense since it's part of your routine.

× my collection has come to I think around 40 bottles and they are full of different types of scents

✓ my collection has come to, I think, around 40 bottles and it is full of different types of scents

The subject 'collection' is singular, so the verb and pronoun referring to it should also be singular. 'They are' is incorrect because it refers to 'collection' which is singular; it should be 'it is'. Also, a comma is needed after 'come to' and 'I think' to improve clarity.

× I wear different scents in different occasions

✓ I wear different scents on different occasions

The correct preposition to use with 'occasions' is 'on', not 'in'. This is a common prepositional error affecting the meaning and naturalness of the sentence.

× I'll wear a more furry scent so that it.

✓ I'll wear a more furry scent so that it suits the occasion

The sentence is incomplete and 'furry' is not an appropriate adjective for scent. Possibly 'fruity' or 'floral' was intended. Also, the phrase 'so that it' is incomplete and needs an object or verb to complete the meaning.

× I don't buy perfume as a gift.

✓ I don't buy perfumes as gifts.

When speaking generally about items in plural, 'perfumes' and 'gifts' should be plural to match the general sense. Using singular 'perfume' and 'gift' here is less natural and can cause ambiguity.

× I don't think buying a perfume would be an expensive things to do

✓ I don't think buying a perfume would be an expensive thing to do

The word 'things' is plural but refers to a singular action 'buying a perfume'. Therefore, it should be 'thing' to agree in number with the singular action.