Perfume— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cavabınızda daha təbii ifadələrdən istifadə edin və sözləri düzgün seçin. Məsələn, 'I love since I like to use perfume' ifadəsi qarışıqdır və 'flour' əvəzinə 'floral' demək daha düzgündür. Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və məntiqli edin.

Example: Yes, I really like perfume because I use it every day. I have a large collection, mostly branded and quite expensive. Usually, I prefer floral or light fragrances rather than strong or heavy scents.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və məntiqli qurun. 'I found using those perfumes smell like flowers' ifadəsi qarışıqdır. Həmçinin, marka adlarını düzgün qeyd edin və əlavə məlumat verərkən əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

Example: Yes, I use perfume daily because I like floral scents that last a long time. Sometimes, I prefer light perfumes like Actions or Crystal Sense because I enjoy subtle fragrances.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və fikirlərinizi daha aydın ifadə edin. Məsələn, 'Her performance was very old' ifadəsi mənasızdır. Hekayəni daha sadə və məntiqli şəkildə danışın.

Example: Yes, I have bought perfume as a gift before. For example, I gave a floral perfume to my best friend on her 17th birthday, and she was very happy with the gift.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və düzgün qurun. 'spar from a very expensive' və digər ifadələr qarışıqdır. Sadə və aydın ifadələrlə fikrinizi bildirin.

Example: Yes, I think perfumes are quite expensive because they have good quality and nice scents.

× Absolutely. I love since I like to use perfume on a daily basis.

✓ Absolutely. I love it since I like to use perfume on a daily basis.

The sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'love'. The verb 'love' requires an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'it' clarifies what is loved.

× Usually I prefer to put on flour or fragrance rather than stronger or heaviest scents.

✓ Usually I prefer to put on floral or fragrance scents rather than stronger or heavier scents.

The word 'flour' is incorrect; it should be 'floral' to describe a type of scent. Also, 'heaviest' should be 'heavier' to correctly compare scents. 'Floral' is an adjective describing scent type.

× Absolutely yes, I found using those perfumes smell like flowers and stay a long time also, and I sometimes prefer to wear light perfume such as Actions or Crystal Sense because I like uh, scents umm, myself very well.

✓ Absolutely yes, I find that using those perfumes makes me smell like flowers and they last a long time. Also, I sometimes prefer to wear light perfumes such as Actions or Crystal Sense because I like those scents very much.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and awkward structure. 'Found' should be 'find' to match present tense. 'Using those perfumes smell' should be 'using those perfumes makes me smell'. 'Stay a long time' should be 'they last a long time'. The sentence is split for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, once I gifted a flowers perfume to my best friends on her 17th birthday.

✓ Yes, once I gifted a floral perfume to my best friend on her 17th birthday.

'Flowers perfume' is incorrect; it should be 'floral perfume'. 'Best friends' should be singular 'best friend' to match 'her'. The past tense 'gifted' is correct here.

× Her performance was very old and and the end when I gift perfumes she was delighted with my son's gift.

✓ Her perfume was very old, and in the end, when I gifted perfumes, she was delighted with my gift.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'performance' should be 'perfume'; 'and and the end' should be 'and in the end'; 'gift' should be 'gifted' to match past tense; 'my son's gift' is unclear and likely incorrect, changed to 'my gift' for clarity.

× Yes, I think spar from a very expensive because, uh performs, umm was uh, quite and uh good sense umm because of it's expensive.

✓ Yes, I think perfumes are very expensive because they have a good scent and are costly.

The original sentence is unclear and contains many errors. 'Spar from a very expensive' is incorrect; corrected to 'perfumes are very expensive'. 'Performs' should be 'perfumes'. 'Because of it's expensive' is incorrect; corrected to 'are costly'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.