Perfume— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but a bit repetitive and slightly unnatural. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use more varied vocabulary. Also, ensure your sentences are complete and connected smoothly.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy wearing perfumes because they boost my confidence and make me feel refreshed. For instance, a pleasant scent can motivate me throughout the day and leave a positive impression on others.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and detailed, but try to avoid redundancy such as repeating 'in my daily life' twice. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly.

Example: Yes, I wear perfume every day because it helps me feel more confident. Moreover, my choice varies with the seasons; for example, I prefer floral scents in summer and stronger vanilla fragrances during winter.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and avoiding repetition. Also, try to connect your ideas with linking words for better flow.

Example: Yes, I would buy perfume as a gift because most people appreciate pleasant scents. Additionally, giving perfume is thoughtful since the recipient will remember me whenever they wear it.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question well but could be more concise and use more formal vocabulary. Avoid informal expressions like '1' and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I believe perfumes can be costly. However, investing in a high-quality perfume is worthwhile because expensive brands usually offer better scents. On the other hand, if quality is not a priority, more affordable options are available.

× I love.

✓ I love it.

The sentence 'I love.' is incomplete because the verb 'love' requires an object. Adding 'it' completes the sentence and clarifies what is loved.

× If I don't wear any perfume then it makes me feel insecure.

✓ If I don't wear any perfume, then I feel insecure.

The pronoun 'it' is unclear here. The subject should be 'I' because the feeling of insecurity is experienced by the speaker, not the perfume.

× Yes, I will buy perfume as a gift because I believe every person loves to smell good and if I give someone a perfume as a gift then they will love it because whenever they wear the perfume they will Remember Me.

✓ Yes, I will buy perfume as a gift because I believe every person loves to smell good, and if I give someone a perfume as a gift, they will love it because whenever they wear the perfume, they will remember me.

The pronoun 'Me' should be lowercase 'me' as it is not at the beginning of a sentence. Also, commas are added for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× Yes I do think perfumes are expensive but if I prefer a good quality perfume then I should buy an expensive 1 cause always the expensive perfumes have good quality but if I don't value the quality then I can go for cheaper one.

✓ Yes, I do think perfumes are expensive, but if I prefer a good quality perfume, then I should buy an expensive one because expensive perfumes always have good quality, but if I don't value the quality, then I can go for a cheaper one.

The numeral '1' should be replaced with the word 'one' to match the singular noun. Also, 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because'. Commas are added for clarity.