Mirrors— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「them myself」や「upholstery」は文脈に合いません。また、「two or three years」は時間の表現として不適切です。より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけ、文法と語彙の正確さを向上させましょう。

Example: I don't usually like looking at myself in the mirror, but I check my hairstyle and clothes every morning before going to work.

Suggestion: 文法の誤りや意味の不明瞭さが目立ちます。例えば、「I want to check my batting formula」は過去形にすべきで、「my wife, I don't like to watch it」の部分は意味が通じません。話の流れを整理し、明確な文を作る練習をしましょう。

Example: Yes, three years ago, I bought a large mirror to help me check my batting stance in baseball. However, my wife didn't like it, so I decided to remove it from our home.

Suggestion: 全体的に意味は伝わりますが、「inside camera」や「subordinate of the mirror」という表現は不自然です。より適切な語彙を使い、簡潔に表現しましょう。

Example: No, I don't carry a mirror with me. Instead, I use my smartphone's front camera to check my face when needed.

Suggestion: 内容は理解できますが、文が長く繰り返しがあるため、もっと簡潔に話すと良いです。また、「efficient」より「effective」の方が適切です。接続詞を使って論理的に繋げましょう。

Example: Yes, I would use mirrors to decorate my room because a large mirror can make the space look bigger and brighter, which is very effective.

× No, I don't like to look at them myself in the mirror.

✓ No, I don't like to look at myself in the mirror.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to themselves. The correct reflexive pronoun is 'myself'.

× Also, every morning I always stare at mirror for two or three years.

✓ Also, every morning I always stare at the mirror for two or three minutes.

The phrase 'stare at mirror' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'mirror'. Also, 'two or three years' is illogical in this context; it should be 'two or three minutes' to indicate duration of staring each morning.

× Yes, three years ago I want to check my batting formula at baseball.

✓ Yes, three years ago I wanted to check my batting form in baseball.

The verb 'want' should be in the past tense 'wanted' to match the past time reference 'three years ago'. Also, 'batting formula' is likely a mistake; 'batting form' is more appropriate in baseball context.

× Also, I bought a very big mirror, which is the same height as umm, me.

✓ Also, I bought a very big mirror, which is the same height as me.

The sentence is correct in preposition usage here; no correction needed.

× It's uh, so big that my wife, I don't like to watch it, so I will throw it away.

✓ It's uh, so big that my wife doesn't like to look at it, so I will throw it away.

The sentence has a pronoun and verb agreement issue. 'My wife, I don't like' is incorrect. It should be 'my wife doesn't like to look at it' to correctly express that the wife dislikes the mirror.

× No, I don't take a mirror in my daily life.

✓ No, I don't carry a mirror in my daily life.

The verb 'take' is not appropriate here; 'carry' is better to express bringing something with you regularly.

× If I can use the inside camera, I can look at myself, especially the face.

✓ If I can use the front camera, I can look at myself, especially my face.

'Inside camera' is not a common term; 'front camera' is the correct term for the camera used to look at oneself. Also, 'the face' should be 'my face' to specify whose face.

× It's a subordinate of the mirror.

✓ It's a substitute for the mirror.

The word 'subordinate' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'substitute', meaning it replaces the mirror.

× Yes, a mirror is very efficient for decorating inside my house because by using a very big mirror inside the house, you can feel that room is much wider than usual and it's very effective way to use mirrors.

✓ Yes, a mirror is very effective for decorating inside my house because by using a very big mirror inside the house, you can feel that the room is much wider than usual and it's a very effective way to use mirrors.

The word 'efficient' is not appropriate here; 'effective' is better to describe the usefulness of mirrors in decoration. Also, 'that room' should be 'the room' to specify the particular room. 'It's very effective way' needs the article 'a' before 'very effective way'.