Mirrors— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases. Also, use more precise vocabulary and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

Example: Yes, I usually look at myself in the mirror every morning to check my hairstyle and skin condition. However, I don't do this often because I sometimes feel a lack of self-confidence.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Make your answer more coherent by completing your thoughts and using linking words to connect ideas. Also, clarify why you like buying mirrors with specific reasons.

Example: Yes, I have bought mirrors before. Even though I don't like looking at myself much, I enjoy having mirrors because they add a unique touch to my room, especially when sunlight reflects through the window.

Suggestion: Reduce the use of filler words and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, be more concise and clear in your explanation.

Example: No, I don't usually carry a mirror with me. However, before meeting someone like a friend or my supervisor, I try to find a reflective surface to quickly check my appearance.

Suggestion: Work on sentence clarity and coherence by avoiding fragmented sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific descriptions of the effect mirrors have in your room.

Example: Yes, I would use mirrors to decorate my room because it has a large window that lets in plenty of sunlight. When mirrors are placed on my table or bookshelf, they reflect the light and create colorful patterns, which I find very pleasant.

× whether there are any acne in my face's skin or not

✓ whether there is any acne on my facial skin or not

The word 'acne' is an uncountable noun and should be treated as singular. Also, 'in my face's skin' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' and 'facial skin' is the proper term.

× despite the fact that I do not like uh, to look myself in the mirror

✓ despite the fact that I do not like to look at myself in the mirror

The verb 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to oneself. 'Look myself' is incorrect; it should be 'look at myself'.

× I really like to buy them. I uh, think of them as uh, unique structure in my room

✓ I really like to buy them. I uh, think of them as a unique structure in my room

The noun 'structure' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× before I want to meet someone, uh, a friend or perhaps my supervisor

✓ before I meet someone, uh, a friend or perhaps my supervisor

The phrase 'before I want to meet' is incorrect; 'before I meet' is the correct form to express a future action that will happen before meeting someone.

× I don't always carry a mirror in my backpack or in my car's dashboard

✓ I don't always carry a mirror in my backpack or on my car's dashboard

The preposition 'on' is used with 'dashboard' because it is a surface. Also, 'car's dashboard' is singular and correct here.

× somewhere that reflects my picture so I can, uh, do a real quick check on my style

✓ somewhere that reflects my image so I can, uh, do a real quick check of my style

The word 'picture' is not appropriate here; 'image' or 'reflection' fits better. Also, the phrase 'check on my style' should be 'check of my style' or 'check my style'.

× it creates A reflective. Colorful aisles are lights. That's very pleasant for me

✓ it creates a reflective, colorful aisle of lights. That's very pleasant for me

The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors. 'Aisles are lights' is incorrect; it should be 'aisle of lights'. Also, capitalization and punctuation need correction.