Mirrors— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: まず最初に質問に対して直接的な主張（肯定/否定）をはっきり述べ、その後で理由や頻度を具体的に説明してください。現在の回答は文法的ミスや語順の問題（“I every day I look at it”など）があり、意味が取りにくくなっています。また、関連語彙（acne, skin condition, check my appearance など）を使い、接続詞（because, although, so）で文をつなげて論理的に話してください。発音や流暢さも向上させるため、短く明瞭な文を2〜3文でまとめる練習をしましょう。

Example: Not really. I try to avoid looking at mirrors because I’m self-conscious about my acne, but I do check my face every day to see if it needs any treatment. Because of that, I usually glance at the mirror quickly rather than spending much time looking.

Suggestion: 回答は直接的で良いですが、時制と語順の誤り（“bought and give it, gave it to her”）を直し、詳細を一つ加えるとより自然になります。過去の出来事を話すときは過去形を一貫して使い、理由や感情を付け加えると内容が豊かになります。接続詞（so, because, then）や形容詞（small, pretty, useful）を使って文をつなげてください。

Example: Yes. When I was a child I accidentally broke my mother’s mirror, so I bought a replacement for her. It was a small, pretty mirror and she was happy to have it.

Suggestion: 主張はあるが不完全な文（“check my.”、“I do not have anything on my.”）があり意味が通りにくいです。目的語を明確にして（check my makeup / hair / face）、理由を具体的に述べてください。また冗長を避け、一度に1〜2のポイントに絞ると効果的です。自然な語彙（makeup, hair, appearance, touch up）を使いましょう。

Example: Yes, I always carry a small mirror when I go out because I often need to check my makeup and hair. If something is smudged I can quickly touch it up.

Suggestion: 回答は論理的ですが、語の繰り返し（“I I”）や冗長な表現が見られます。より自然にするには、短い主張の後に具体的な理由を一つか二つ述べ、必要なら例を加えましょう。語彙はdecorative mirror, practical, space, natural light などを使うと良いです。また簡潔にまとめる練習をしてください。

Example: No, I wouldn’t. I already have mirrors in the bathroom and living room, so I don’t need extra decorative mirrors in my bedroom. Also, I prefer artwork to decorate my room rather than mirrors.

× Not really because I don't want to work my acne or bad condition skin but I every day I look at it.

✓ Not really because I don't want to work on my acne or badly conditioned skin, but I look at it every day.

The sentence misuses pronouns and has incorrect verb + preposition combinations. Use 'work on my acne' (verb + preposition) not 'work my acne'. 'Bad condition skin' should be 'badly conditioned skin' or 'my skin is in poor condition'. Also word order: 'every day' goes after the verb phrase. Ensure pronoun 'it' clearly refers to 'my skin' or 'my acne'.

× Yes, actually I broke my mother's mirror when I was a child, so I bought and give it, gave it to her. That mirror, that mirror is cute.

✓ Yes, actually I broke my mother's mirror when I was a child, so I bought a new one and gave it to her. That mirror was cute.

Tense consistency needed: 'bought and gave it' should be past tense 'bought and gave'. Also 'give it' is present and incorrect. 'Bought a new one' clarifies object. Use past 'was cute' to match past events. Avoid repetition 'That mirror, that mirror'.

× Of course, I always take a mirror with me when I go out because I want to check my. I do not have anything on my.

✓ Of course, I always take a mirror with me when I go out because I want to check myself. I do not have anything on my face.

Pronoun and noun omissions: 'check my' is incomplete; use reflexive pronoun 'check myself' or 'check my appearance'. 'Anything on my' is incomplete; specify 'my face'. Also reflexive pronoun fits checking oneself.

× No, I have never used mirrors to decorate my room because I I have already had mirrors in the bathroom or even in the living room so I don't need it.

✓ No, I have never used mirrors to decorate my room because I already have mirrors in the bathroom and in the living room, so I don't need any more.

Use present perfect 'have never used' is fine, but 'I have already had mirrors' is unnatural; use 'I already have mirrors'. Avoid repeating 'I'. Use 'any more' to refer to additional mirrors rather than 'it'. Ensure plural agreement and correct article usage.