Mirrors— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms (e.g., 'to freshen up', 'to identify').

Example: Yes, I do. I usually check the mirror twice a day to freshen up and make sure my hair and clothes look neat. For example, I examine my skin briefly to spot any blemishes so I can treat them if needed.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer and organize reasons logically. Use correct verbs and clearer phrases (e.g., 'I have bought several mirrors' and 'they make rooms look bigger and brighter'). Limit to 2–3 supporting points and one linking word.

Example: Yes, I have bought several mirrors. I like them because they make rooms appear larger and reflect natural light, so the space feels brighter and more inviting.

Suggestion: Use a concise topic sentence and a specific reason with correct phrasing (e.g., 'freshen up'). Use singular/plural consistently and one linking word for clarity.

Example: Yes, I usually carry a small pocket mirror. I use it to freshen up during the day and to quickly check my makeup or hair before meetings.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear yes/no and then give two specific benefits with correct vocabulary and linking words. Correct nouns and adjectives (e.g., 'make a room look more spacious', 'add brightness'). Keep sentences short and grammatical.

Example: Yes, I would. Mirrors make a room look more spacious and reflect light, which brightens the space. For instance, placing a large mirror opposite a window can double the amount of natural light in the room.

× I examine my skin so identify any problems and I can decide how to treat them.

✓ I examine my skin to identify any problems and decide how to treat them.

Use 'to' before a verb to express purpose (infinitive), not just the base verb. 'So identify' is incorrect; use 'to identify'. Also avoid unnecessary repeated modal 'can' when simple present expresses ability/possibility here. Suggestions: replace 'so identify' with 'to identify' and remove the redundant 'I can' or change to 'so that I can' if keeping modal intent.

× Yes, I am about lots of mirrors because I believe that mirrors at some space 2 rooms and they provide the extra lights in our room, our house uh I prefer to bought them and have them in my bedrooms or other rooms.

✓ Yes, I buy a lot of mirrors because I believe mirrors make small spaces and rooms look larger and provide extra light in the house; I prefer to buy them for the bedrooms and other rooms.

Multiple issues: 'I am about lots of mirrors' is incorrect phrasing; use 'I buy a lot of mirrors' or 'I like having a lot of mirrors'. 'Mirrors at some space 2 rooms' is ungrammatical—intended idea is that mirrors make small spaces or rooms look bigger. 'I prefer to bought' uses incorrect verb form—use base form after 'prefer to' ('buy'). Sentence run-on needs punctuation and clearer structure. Suggestions: restructure sentence into clear clauses, use 'buy' not 'am about' or 'bought', and express effect of mirrors as 'make rooms look larger' and 'provide extra light'.

× Yes, I often carry a pocket mirror with me because I want to freshen off and also I can check my appearance when I use them.

✓ Yes, I often carry a pocket mirror with me because I want to freshen up and also check my appearance when I use it.

Phrasal verb is 'freshen up', not 'freshen off'. After 'also' the verb can be the base form parallel to previous verb—remove 'I can' for conciseness. Pronoun 'them' is plural but 'a pocket mirror' is singular; use 'it'. Suggestions: use 'freshen up', keep parallel verb forms, and match pronoun number to noun.

× Kiss mirrors as an object for decorations because they can lots of space and they our rooms look spacious when we use mirrors and also they can add lots of brights in our home, our rooms and when others look at them they are really brighter instead of don't having mirrors.

✓ I use mirrors as decorative objects because they can make rooms look spacious and add brightness to our home; when others see them, the rooms look brighter than if there were no mirrors.

Many pronoun and noun errors: 'Kiss' likely intended 'I use'. 'they can lots of space' lacks verb—should be 'make rooms look spacious'. 'they our rooms look spacious' is ungrammatical. 'lots of brights' is wrong; use 'brightness'. 'instead of don't having mirrors' should be comparative 'than if there were no mirrors'. Suggestions: start with 'I use', include verbs like 'make' and 'add', use uncountable noun 'brightness', and use correct comparative structure 'than if there were no mirrors'.