Mirrors— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cần trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sửa ngữ pháp. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes/No và tần suất), sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể về thói quen (ví dụ thời gian trong ngày, việc kiểm tra tóc/quần áo). Hạn chế tiếng ồ ừ, tránh lan man và giữ tối đa 3–4 câu. Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp như "appearance", "hair", "outfit", "neat" và cấu trúc đơn giản đúng ngữ pháp.

Example: Yes, I often check my appearance every morning. I usually look at my hair and outfit to make sure everything looks neat and tidy. This helps me feel confident before leaving the house.

Suggestion: Cần tránh phát biểu chung chung và lỗi ngữ pháp. Bắt đầu trực tiếp (Yes/No + brief statement), rồi đưa ra lý do cụ thể nếu cần (ví dụ: for makeup or checking outfit). Tránh nói "every girls" (sai ngữ pháp) — dùng "most people" hoặc "many girls". Giữ 2–3 câu, dùng linking word đơn giản như "because".

Example: Yes, I have bought mirrors before. I bought them mainly for doing my makeup and checking my outfit because I want to look presentable. Many people find a mirror essential for daily grooming.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời rõ ràng về thói quen và lý do, sắp xếp câu mạch lạc. Nên nói liệu bạn có mang gương theo hay không, và nếu không, nêu cách thay thế (phone camera). Tránh lặp từ và ồ ừ. Giữ 2–3 câu, dùng linking word như "because" hoặc "so" để liên kết ý.

Example: I don't usually carry a separate mirror with me because I find my phone camera more convenient. I use the front camera to quickly check my hair or makeup when I'm out.

Suggestion: Cần diễn đạt hoàn chỉnh và thêm lý do cụ thể. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề (Yes/No + brief reason), rồi nêu 1–2 lợi ích cụ thể (make room look bigger, check outfit, reflect light). Tránh câu bỏ dở; hoàn thiện suy nghĩ và dùng từ nối như "also" hoặc "and". Giữ 2–3 câu.

Example: Yes, I have a large mirror in my room. It helps me check my outfit and also makes the room look bigger and brighter by reflecting light.

× I often check my appearance in the morning and it's time when I have leather I want to my outlook compassing my hair and my clothes Looks, uh, look, umm, trim, neat and polite.

✓ I often check my appearance in the morning when I have time; I want my look to be neat, with my hair and clothes looking trim and polite.

The original sentence uses incorrect verb forms and word choices and mixes tense and time expressions. 'it's time when I have leather' is incorrect; likely meant 'when I have time'. 'I want to my outlook compassing' is ungrammatical; correct structure is 'I want my look to be...'. Use present simple for habitual actions ('I often check'). Rearrange for clarity: 'when I have time' and use adjectives correctly ('neat', 'trim', 'polite').

× Yes, of course, I think every every girls will have their or have their own mirror because they all they want.

✓ Yes, of course, I think every girl will have her own mirror because they all want to look good.

Mismatch between 'every' and plural 'girls'. After 'every' use singular noun: 'every girl'. Pronoun must match gender and number: 'her own mirror'. The clause 'they all they want' is redundant and awkward; simplify to 'they all want to look good'.

× All they want is their appearance look good in their other eyes.

✓ All they want is for their appearance to look good in their own eyes.

Incorrect pronoun 'other eyes' should be 'own eyes'. Also need infinitive construction: 'for their appearance to look good'. Use possessive 'their' correctly and keep pronouns consistent.

× I just bring my mirror, it's time when I make up umm other else other else.

✓ I just bring my mirror when I do my makeup.

Use present simple for habitual actions: 'I bring' and 'I do my makeup'. Remove unclear phrases 'it's time when' and repeated 'other else'. 'Make up' as noun should be 'makeup' or verb phrase 'do my makeup'.

× I easily use my phone to use camera to check my appearance.

✓ I usually use my phone camera to check my appearance.

Repetition 'use my phone to use camera' is redundant. Use 'phone camera' or 'camera on my phone'. 'Easily' is odd here; 'usually' suits habit. Keep concise: 'I usually use my phone camera'.

× Yes, of course I use a large mirror in my room.

✓ Yes, of course I have a large mirror in my room.

Both 'use' and 'have' can be correct; context implies possession/placement rather than current action, so 'have' is clearer. Present simple 'I have' indicates a present state.

× Uh, it's not just, it's not just convenient to me. It's not just convenient for me to chase my outfit, but it also.

✓ It's not just convenient for me to check my outfit; it also helps me see how I look overall.

'Chase my outfit' is incorrect collocation; correct verb is 'check' an outfit. Sentence was incomplete; complete the idea with another function of the mirror. Use present simple for general truths and habits.